After a Breakup and Depression, a Song Under the Sea Heals the World

Very good! Keep it up! I have read so many, but this is the only one where the songs are slowly written according to the plot line. The other authors were speechless. There was no foreshadowing at all. They just straight up wrote the text and threw the song as hard as they could. Yes, they just used throwing!

How to put it... Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables, some people think they are good-looking, some people think they are not good-looking, and their interests and hobbies are different. No work can be liked by everyone. Please do not attack personally. Since there is such a thing as comments, they are used to let major netizens express their opinions after reading the article. For a work, good comments can be encouraged. Comments that are not good-looking can also allow the author to understand what kind of articles major netizens like to read and further grow. At the beginning, I felt that this entry point was better. The author is a patient with depression, and the first song that opened his peak was "Under the Sea." But what I personally like better is that the male protagonist grows step by step through various songs, and slowly reaches the top of the music world, instead of almost all chapters being related to the female protagonist, and the part about singing is briefly touched on...

I've just read the latest chapter. It's the first shocking novel I've read this year. The concept is very good, the emotions are real, and the author's writing skills are strong and he can describe the trivial matters of high school realistically. The most awesome ones are the three songs, which are very suitable for the occasion... Looking forward to the follow-up

The details of this book are very well described, and it is very easy for people to read. There are too few books like Qimao. Good books are not afraid of lack of people. I think this book will become popular sooner or later.

This must be the most crotchless among the male protagonists with the system. Even if the article is bad, the main character has a crotch. A score of 2 on the piano in the art exam is still a talent. When reading the article, some of the things I wrote above will appear repeatedly in a chapter. Does the author have no outline? It's like trying to make up the word count for a college entrance examination essay.

I have read all the time-traveling and singing-god-system movies, and this one is the best. I read a book about the quintessence of Chinese culture before, and it was also good-looking and related to the singing and opera at that time, and it promoted Chinese culture. But it also gets a bit messy later on. The key is that it still sucks. 😥 I really hope that the author will do a good job and this kind of good thing will not be unfinished😌😁

Personally, I feel that music is not only art, but also a link between different lives and cultures. When reading entertainment articles, I have a habit of searching for songs in the song section and then reading them in conjunction with novels. However, although the setting of this book is full of potential, the story seems to lack the kind of climax that makes people's hearts beat faster. It may be that I have read too many entertainment articles and have too high requirements for books. It is often unsatisfactory and even feels boring. Give me a little advice 1. Strengthen conflicts: Increase the challenges and conflicts faced by the protagonist in the parallel world, such as confrontation with the authority of the local music industry in the later stage, or in the mid-term when participating in competitions to select songs or encountering a lack of inspiration during the creation process. (Even if there is a system, it is not omnipotent) 2. Deepen the character: Make the protagonist's character more distinct and not so cowardly and inferior. Originally, readers are just ordinary people in reality. When reading novels, you have to be brought into the heart of the protagonist. How can you retain people? Try to show their growth and transformation through their experiences in parallel worlds. 3. Enrich the plot: Add some unexpected twists to the story, such as the protagonist accidentally discovering the music of this world or a movie or TV series that has some connection with the original world or makes it his own. 4. Musical elements: Since it is mainly about singing and writing songs, you can downplay the creation process of some songs or change it to reporters or fans to ask questions, describe more and how the fermentation of these songs affects the people and environment around you, add more music variety shows, and strive to be able to face global music variety later.

Water, water, the plot is dead

It shouldn't be the bottom of the sea, it should be sea water

You've been updating it every few weeks. How can you be so cool?