Star Trace Gate

I have been reading books for many years, and I am speechless after reading the book of False Ring. The plot is reasonable, the pig's feet are not brainless, the author's writing is also good, and he occasionally drives a car (haha, the car often drives very suddenly, I like it). Okay, I have a lot to say, but this is the only amount of ink I have left to write it down. Finally, I recommend a very good plot that you can watch.

I would like to give a few comments to Pseudo Ring. It can be seen that this book is different from the abnormal way of thinking, layout, and background type, which led to some problems when writing this book. The first is the introduction of Star Gate. The explanation report is complete so far. The disputes and battles caused by the news have begun, but there is really no information about him. There are not many details, and the description of the classification and professional abilities of the combatants coming out of the star gate is not enough, it is too rough, especially the star gate and reality are two lines of one yin and one yang. The star will affect reality, and reality will also affect the situation in the star. So, as a huge national machine, the author may have some problems with the setting. First, people The second is ability, and the third is power. It is impossible to realize the power of siege at all. With the huge machine of real power, both intelligence resources and capabilities are much stronger than some organizations and casual cultivators. They definitely account for the majority, but from the current point of view, Shanghai is still too powerful. Moreover, regarding the impact of Star Gate on the real world, there is still There are some other narratives that are not complete, difficult to understand, and too uncomfortable. Some details are not in place, and some more foreshadowing is too shallow, and the action is too fast. For example, I have seen more than 40 chapters so far. The information about Xingliangmen has been found out and revealed very quickly. They have fought two or three times. To be honest, do these people really dare to sell information? Moreover, the composition of the Star Gate forces is relatively scattered and messy. The battle started in a hurry. There was not enough introduction about some unions or organizations and camp members, which made it difficult to clearly understand them when watching. It was very confusing. My suggestion is that you are completely present. You can drag dozens of pictures and wait until the second Stargate mission comes out before fighting. There are also many details about the camp's capabilities and the impact of the Stargate in the real world that are not realistic and harmonious enough. For example, the official strength of the ability, the number of personnel cannot be so small, and is there only this one game? Has anyone else had problems elsewhere? Can you transfer people from other places? What are the characteristics of these people, and what abilities do they have foreshadowing the future and even the General Administration? Another thing is that the descriptions of other camps are too early. Readers have already started fighting without knowing the strength of the Star Gate. Many people do not have a clear understanding of the strength of the people who come out of the Star Gate, and to what extent are their abilities reflected in the real world? Are senior brothers the same as strangers? So what kind of organizations are derived from this? Will there be any organizations? My suggestion is that the fight can be dragged out, and there is another question, when did this star gate come out? How many came out? How was it discovered? How is it used? How much does each camp have? From the current point of view, this is a relatively big loophole and problem, especially for the protagonist. He started the mission directly from the beginning of contact with the Star Gate. After the mission was completed, he was hastily intercepted and then forced to reverse the battle. However, some of the foreshadowing of the Star Gate and some things in reality were not grasped, and it still felt not quite right. It's smooth and uncomfortable. I can give you an example, Northern Tomb Robbery Notes, Under One Person, or some other related genres. The storyline about this news is not perfect enough, and the control of the real world is not enough. It is too hasty, and it is uncomfortable to watch. In fact, readers cannot understand many places.

Is this a book that a false precept could write? Although the back part of the Ninth District: Wind Rises in Dragon City is a bit boring, at least the protagonist has a brain and an IQ. Here he has completely become a piece of garbage with a brain but no brain. He knows that he has recruited a group of people in the dungeon and does not think about breaking the situation. What is there to be afraid of here? I guess that someone else is my family and may plot against me. On the other hand, it is better to be undefended. If he is good-looking, he will take off his pants and want to have sex. The more Cao opens the book, the greater the gap.

Is this science fiction? Love and magic are everywhere🔮🔮🔮🔮🔮🔮🔮🔮🔮🔮🔮, where is science and where is science fiction? I don't understand, Star Gate 🚪 This should be an interstellar battle, where thousands of races stand together. It's similar to the other side of deep space. In the vast universe, the birth and death of a galaxy is just a moment of mottled light. Looking up at the stars, there is always a sense of sadness that the ending is destined. Where will you and me be after thousands of years? The country, the fire of civilization, and the earth are all but a speck of dust in the deep sky. A moment in the starry sky and a thousand years in the world. The life of insects will last forever, and you and I are still fighting for survival... This is science fiction.

The protagonist has experienced life and death, prison, and bullying. Just like this, a person entered a star gate that was a matter of life and death. His words were completely out of tune, like a child who had not grown up. The author wanted to make the story more humorous, but forced it so hard that the character of the protagonist was completely torn apart and his words were ridiculously childish. The plot is also a mess, forcing the plot forward. What a shame about this subject matter.

To be honest, when I read more than 70 chapters from the beginning, I really wanted to give up the book, because the author's bland plots and some dirty jokes that made me uncomfortable made me disgusted. But the further you read, the deeper the author's skill becomes and the more you can't stop. I even read it all night long one night. The writing is really good. This book is also the only novel that I want to reward after reading Qimao for so many years. If nothing else, the writing is really good.

The part about kowtowing made me sick to my stomach. Entering the star gate, either you die or I die. Everyone hangs his head on his belt. Failure means death. He insists on talking about such righteousness. He made his side feel so aloof. I vomited. Those people all died to protect the male protagonist. You want to kowtow to the male protagonist. The male protagonist can kill his mother, but she can't kill the male protagonist's people? If you can't afford to lose, don't play. You're even lower than Tang San.

How to put it this way, the quality of pseudo-big books has always been guaranteed, so much so that 99% of the books on the list are no longer attractive to me. Generally speaking, there are roughly two types of people: 1. Those who are impatient and like to read mindless and exciting articles, and need a fast pace. 2. I am relatively young and not suitable for reading this kind of book.

What did you write? After reading more than 100 chapters, I didn't want to read it. I bought it with a 9.9 Rating. I can't write sensationalism. The love story in the first star gate is just a mess. The father died suddenly at the beginning and the sensationalism is just a mess. The male protagonist has been abused from the beginning. I'll label it with an IQ online. All kinds of mentally weak behaviors are really strong. My teammates are about to be raped. When the team is wiped out, I still lament. Every time, my teammates are about to be wiped out, and the protagonist gets angry and cheats. I really want to watch this kind of plot🤮. There is also an inexplicably empathetic protagonist who wants to save everyone but can't even control himself. The main plot is terrible, but the emotional line is also ridiculously bad. I don't understand why it scores 9.9.

That's it, and with a 9.7 Rating, I'll buy it. What are you writing about?