After Being Sold for One Billion, Her Vest Is On

The ending is too rushed

The heroine's age keeps changing, from twenty to sixteen

The plot is good, but there is too much nonsense, and many descriptions and dialogues skip around.

This book is quite confusing about the ages of the girls in the Hua family. The eldest sister is 24, Hua Luo is 20, and there is an older sister in the middle. The fourth sister is in high school? Are you in your 20s and still in high school? Sisters 2 to 4 are triplets? Hua Luo was given away as soon as she was born, less than two months old, and 4 years old. She was raised outside for 16 years. What a messy schedule.

Messy, unclear expression, lots of nonsense

The author didn't fill in the holes. Didn't he say that the Hua family took back the heroine after a paternity test? In the ending, the heroine is a child of the Mu family and saved her father

It looks good, but it ends. . . . . . .