Rebirth: Don't Miss Good Girls, Don't Waste Bad Girls

This rebirth article is very relevant. Although the protagonist relies on the information about rebirth to get better and better, it is a rebirth article after all. Compared with other rebirth articles, there is no particularly exaggerated plot. Come on, author, the characters need to be written more fully.

Generally speaking, it's okay at the beginning, but then it becomes too hasty, and after hundreds of chapters were written in two chapters, it's unfinished.

I don't think any of them are bad girls. Xu Qingyan is just arrogant and looks down on the male protagonist, but she is not bad. She has never done anything to feel sorry for the male protagonist. The male protagonist was a mess in high school, his grades were second to last in the class, and he went to play video games after school. Who could afford to look up to such a male protagonist?

No brainer. A milk tea shop has a turnover of more than 100,000 yuan on Sunday. It takes 3-5 minutes to make a cup of milk tea. All are calculated as large cups. The author needs to hire a dozen robots to make it non-stop. As a result, the author used 5-6 girls to work in two shifts and easily accomplished it. I'm not surprised or surprised.

The whole article is a boast. In order to explain the reasons for success, countless reasons are given. How can it not arouse the readers' disgust? Is this an argumentative essay or a narrative? The focus of a narrative should be on the process of each event. The author wants to catch everything but fails to catch anything. The result is either procrastination or a hasty ending. This is also a common problem of most online articles!

He knows nothing about the past, has no concept of life, and doesn't even know what the logic is when opening a system. Later, he doesn't mention the system at all, as if the protagonist himself is very strong. Is it really true that after rebirth, money inflation and cognitive decline plummet?

Rebirth does not have a system, so it is naturally difficult. The characters are described in detail and are consistent with real life. Art comes from the profound portrayal of life. Definitely a fine piece of writing.

It's not bad, but it's annoying that it's unfinished. It's over as soon as you start.

Very pretty

It feels good-looking, very warm feeling The age of youth and ignorance, the youth and ignorance of you and me When I read it, I couldn't help but recall my high school past, so I didn't read it very quickly. It took about three days. I saw the latest chapter, Chapter 166, and recorded it~