Oh No! I've Been Surrounded by Demonesses from the Hehuan Sect

It's really not that good. I read Chapter 36 and couldn't stand it any longer. During a fight, I made a move and said a sentence. The author also went into detail about some messy things. It's very watery. But I can still read it as a Xiaohuangwen. But you have started to write the plot story. It's a mess. I can't stand it anymore. I don't know why you don't write Xiaohuangwen well. Why do you think that people who see the title of your book come in to watch you write the main text?

Not bad, not bad. It's very interesting. I felt really relaxed physically and mentally, and my heart was full of excitement. Come on, the author will update more, it will be fun to watch😎😎

The plot design is reasonable and the plot advancement speed is very good. I have read many similar articles and this one is very comfortable. I hope more people will read it so that the author will not be unable to continue writing.

It's said to be a cool article, but it's not cool at all. Especially after 200 photos. Anyone can step on the protagonist. Moreover, his enemies were several realms bigger than him every time. Every time this happened, he stood by and watched like a waste. If you can't do anything, what's the point? And the rest of the plot becomes confusing. I feel like I write whatever comes to my mind.

The early stage is quite attractive, and it can be seen that the author wants to write it seriously, but for the heroine, the writing is very casual, but a little informal, giving people the impression that the heroine is innocent, but she is stuck in the writing style or the conception and writing are not clear. Later, she starts to let herself go, just like a brainless novel, she can do whatever she wants, and all the previous foreshadowing is discarded, and for There is no emotional description of the heroine. As long as she has played in it, she is completely devoted. Regarding the system, it feels superfluous. The resources are given very casually, as if what I want is just enough. Whoever I leave behind must be on my side. The description does not feel like a threat to the protagonist at all. The protagonist is in several realms and nods and bows. The protagonist has the final say in everything, and he can do whatever he wants. It feels like I started to be very motivated to write a good novel, but I got bogged down in the writing style, conception, and other reasons. I could only rely on Huang Heshuang to attract me later, and it turned into a novel without any brains at all.

It's very good, the writing is delicate and the plot is well connected. Just one sentence that made my vote spin

Lao Se Pi loves to watch, and it's Wang Zha who comes up

Give yourself a good review

I think it's very interesting. There are many people like me who only watch the show, but why are there so many people in the comment section saying it's not interesting? The plot is very compact, the protagonist grows up very quickly, and the yin and yang setting is pretty good. Five-star praise, urge for more updates.

The Qi Refining Realm will lead to heavenly calamity, so shouldn't there be heavenly calamity in this world every day?