The Fake Rich Man Participated in the Show, and the Cold Goddess Chased Me

The subject matter is quite good, but you know too little about the characters' images and psychological activities, and your own writing style is too shallow, and your knowledge is too one-sided. I think you need to read more classic books. I feel that you have not written an outline and the story and narration are a bit confusing, and the plot of the story is not clearly explained, such as the system.

It's quite nice, but I don't know why some content is missing at the end. Talking about jumping off a building turns out to be another story