Yaoshou! Why Are All My Beast-Control Talents at Mythical Level?

At the beginning of awakening, you can contract one alien beast, two at level 10, and three at level 20. I read the title later and found that the third animal was contracted in chapter 184. The third animal in the contract is already at level 37. The system at level 20 sends a task to contract the third animal, which only rewards 500 points. In chapter 184, the contract for the third animal is actually 10,000 points. It is also very verbose. I have to repeat one thing several times, which is very embarrassing.

There are so many typos. Didn't the author check them himself? What I was shooting was the issue of the protagonist's strength. The third one was signed after more than 180 chapters. The reason given was that the progress was too fast and the foundation was unstable. What kind of foundation do you want, beast master? Dude? After you have summoned yourself, will the physical training affect you? And there will definitely be more and more moves later. The later you move, the worse the integration will be. After all, the first two have almost fixed moves. And even though he was assassinated once, he didn't quickly improve his strength, but just waited for it. If it weren't for the life-saving amulet, he would have died at that time.

Typos. The data is a bit wrong, level 30, changed jobs 2 times. Small repetitions in several places. The others are all very good, very interesting to read, and have wonderful stories.

The setting is not good and the plot is old-fashioned. Among them, his beast control data is really impressive. The speed and defense of a turtle are about the same, and the data is messy, which is really not interesting.

Since it is an experience upgrade, you should not do things that develop too quickly and require accumulation. The role of the system is not that great. If you want to write a novel that combines the system, online games, and cultivation of the three systems, you must think clearly before writing. Otherwise, the more you read, the more complicated it will become, and you will not be able to read it.

Very confusing

To be honest, there are too many pretentious and slap-in-the-face novels. It would be better to write something more bland and occasionally have passionate plots.

How should I put it? It's generally okay, but it's too messy. Was it really written by one person? The people watching were confused,

①There are too many typos and some words have been deleted, making it difficult to read. ②It's a mess. The beast-controlling text requires a job transfer. Everyone has to transfer once at level ten before they can continue to upgrade. However, beast-controlling does not require it. If you don't complete it, can you upgrade? I don't know what I'm writing about, and it relies on experience points to level up. There are various copies, neither fish nor fowl. ③ I have upgraded a lot in the past few days. There are only two beasts in more than 40 chapters. The third beast is almost 200 chapters away. The contract is only made after level 30. It is actually to hone physical skills. It is like a disease. Contracting two beasts at level 30 will give more feedback. It is unnecessary. ④ I still can't understand some systems. The functions are based on money. Money is just a number. How to provide energy for the system to run? Or it has functions directly. The exchange ratio is 1:1w for a while, and 1:10w for a while. You can double the coins when doing tasks. Anyway, I don't like this setting. ⑤Water

The first chapter was fine, but I'll say goodbye to you in Chapter 86. As a protagonist, a time traveler with a system but not invincible, why do you feel so useless?