Stop Chasing the Goddess, the Ugly Duckling Is My Bai Yueguang

It was well written before I don't understand why, instead of writing about the heroine once in eight out of ten chapters, I write about a female teacher who either wears black stockings or bare-legged short skirts for ten chapters in a row. I don't understand what it means. In his previous life, the male protagonist refused to let his father find a partner, and ran away from home in a noisy manner. However, he was extremely filial to his female partner. In this life, he went to a restaurant to buy groceries for the female protagonist every day. It was only when he ran out of money that he remembered to care about this father who asked for money and sold yogurt. I wrote endlessly about the little fat guy on the street, and the heroine didn't appear once in ten chapters. I don't know what the theme of this book is.

After rebirth, he was not used to being a scumbag and flirting with men, and he also had a correct view of revenge. Unlike some authors with weird brains, things that happened in the previous life were not counted in this life, so they should not take revenge and waste their rebirth quota. But the shortcoming of this book is the heroine. The main text is that the heroine has a big problem after her rebirth, which greatly affects the comfort of reading. It is the last among similar books. The heroine affects the evaluation of this book.

The writing style is relaxed and humorous, restoring high school campus life, and the plot is also very coherent.

The plot progress is a bit slow, and I haven't seen any changes in Bai Menghan until now. He still hasn't opened the door in his heart. The villain always comes out to make people disgusting from time to time. Therefore, objectively speaking, this book is relatively average.

What are you writing about?

It's just mediocre. I really can't stand the fact that the male protagonist still hasn't dealt with the green tea girl and the garbage guy.

The heroine has too little plot and the plot is too ink

Zhang Mi is the heroine, right? I'm speechless. I gave up the article when I saw this. A heroine who gives you everything can't live as well as a female partner. What is it about? Can't the male protagonist find a man to be the CEO? I'm speechless.

The beginning was pretty good, but the end was too hasty. From a short story perspective, it's okay. However, there are too few emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists. It is more like a narrative of the male protagonist. It can only be said to be average. If you like the narrative style, you can read it. But if you are looking forward to emotional scenes, I don't recommend it. Personal opinion.

Overall it's pretty good, the plot doesn't drag on, it's fun to tear up enemies after rebirth, and the career line is pretty good too. But there are too few plots for the female protagonist, so the changes can't be made at once. Teacher, this line is not too much, just a little greasy. Then I thought I would write more about my family, stories about my stepmother and younger sister. All in all, it's okay, but if each line could be written in detail, it would be a very good novel.