The Supreme Lord of God, the Female Devil Brings Three Milk Dumplings to the Door to Find Her Father

The rhythm of the plot is smooth, and the excitement comes one after another. On the whole, the rhythm control is more skillful. He does not pretend to be X deliberately, but he pretends to be X everywhere, which greatly improves the enjoyment of the novel.

Is the heroine a human?

I don't know, I think it's okay, anyway, I can trick everyone, hehe. Full of stars, hehe.

The author's writing is good, the story is well constructed, the characters are plump, the vision is broad, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, and the description is in place. It makes you feel immersed in the story, as if you are actually there.

It's speechless. It's good in the early stage. The more you write later, the more disgusting it becomes. Repeat it again or repeat it, and then mock it again and again. It's better to spread the dog food more and fight less in daily life. As soon as the fight comes, I start to get disgusted. The author doesn't know how to write fights. It's not fun at all. It's the same without routines.

The writing is very good, the characters are very three-dimensional and the storyline is addictive. The author's material is novel, the plot is vivid and interesting, and the picture is very strong. It is a good work

After reading a little bit, I have a few questions: the female protagonist is too stupid. Anyone with a little brain can notice something is wrong with the male protagonist. Then there is the realm. I have not seen the specific division of realm. Overall, it is average and can be watched.

I have never read such an imbecile novel. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I am really disgusting and can't stand it anymore! The heroine is written as a mentally retarded person who can barely tolerate it. What is outrageous is that any of the sect disciples in the back are Xuansheng? If I remember correctly, Xuansheng is the top combat power in the lower realm! What are you writing about?

Relaxed, lively and happy

You still don't tell me your identity, you're all here for this. If you don't tell me your identity, who would want to see it?