Put Aside the Cold White Moonlight, the School Beauty Is My Goddess

The literary talent is okay, but the quotations from scriptures are too frequent, which makes it look artificial. Moreover, the male protagonist likes to engage in some small ambiguities, and with some people, he always gives people the illusion of being willing to accept them. He obviously has a girlfriend, but he also likes to meddle in other people's business. When meeting certain women, the male protagonist seems to be a coward, so it is a bit of a failure!

The writing is so unprincipled, and it's ambiguous even if it's a woman!

I was speechless. I gave up the book decisively in Chapter 47. I was thinking about giving up and was harping on it. I didn't even know what you wanted to write. Then I got into trouble with Bai Yueguang's best friend. I gave it a normal slap.

Forget about the formality in front. Everyone looked at me and frowned.

The beginning is quite good, and the mid-term transition is also very interesting. The later stage is expected to be weak, because the pig's foot character setting is established, focusing on one past and present life, who is the only favorite, which limits the readability. Does that man not have the idea of ​​​​three wives and four concubines? In reality, most people can't realize it, but it doesn't mean that they can't be obscene. In the mid-term and later on, they will lose a large part of their readers. The writing, language, plot, structure, and interspersed stories are all outstanding. It's this unique feeling that instantly makes it fall apart from the rest of the world. All the unrealities in reality want to find a place in the book. This book breaks most people's illusions and cannot go far. But also give it a good review.

Forget it. What kind of novel are you writing? Can you just write it seriously? It took me a long time to understand what to write. I have read more than a hundred chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. Let's just go to the ending. What kind of ending are you talking about? If you don't want to write, don't write it👎

The male protagonist pretends to be noble and sings other people's songs, but refuses to sell when others ask him to. If you meet these sophisticated people, they will pay you to buy them. Although the money is less, if you meet such people and search online, you don't have the copyright, and they will directly register the copyright and take possession of your things.

This female protagonist is completely unmatched by the male protagonist. She is just a vase and has no brains.

This book should be late. The author is a little talented, but too procrastinating. He went back and forth with Shen X, almost using up 1/4 of the page, and finally ended hastily by setting an unbeatable goal.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. It's as if he is afraid that others will not know that he is born again.