My Father-in-Law Is Zhu Di, and I'm Over the Moon to Marry a Disfigured Princess

The first and second articles were well written, but the third one was clearly a sweet story. In the third one, the cart was put before the horse. The story of the main male and female protagonists was never written. Instead, I wrote other stories. It was about parallel universes and time travel. The story line was too confusing. I originally thought it was a pretty good novel, but after reading the third one, I felt a bit speechless.

The subject matter is quite novel, and the plot is okay at the beginning, but the book is also a systematic and refreshing genre. At the beginning, I felt a little cautious, but after dozens of chapters... A hundred or so chapters, I just let it go. I took modern things without considering the impact at all, and the description of combat power and purchasing power was too imaginative. In the middle and later stages, it can basically be said that it was let go. The combat power collapsed, the data collapsed, and the plot was also difficult to describe. It cannot be said that it was written, it was fabricated, and the logic and rationality it gave people collapsed as it went on. Especially when looking at the time, before Zhu Yunwen came to the throne, more than 600 years later, and judging from the description, the price of the X5 and the price of the house are definitely where they were before 2020, and it is not the north, Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen, so a roller coaster is more than 200 meters high, I am really..., I thought I had made a mistake. Nowadays, the tallest building in China is only a few tens of white meters tall. In general, the floor and floor of an apartment building is 3.5, Which is the height of 57 floors. The buildings on this floor are all very rare, and there are only a handful of them in China, let alone entertainment buildings. The small aspects have been let go, and the rest just feels like it can be done. I really don't know what I'm still insisting on watching... Maybe it's because I'm looking forward to skipping the Aisin Gioro period.

The writing is okay, but I think this kind of historical writing about some of the high technologies of later generations always feels boring when it comes to drama.

Ever since I started to speculate on modern poetry, I have been completely indifferent. It's really ridiculous, inconsistent, self-contradictory, and confusing plots and ideas. It seems that many people wrote it together. It really can't be considered ancient poetry. It's too empty and the writing style is extremely poor.

After reading Chapter 100, there are many poisonous points. First, the protagonist is an ancient farmer. He said that your culture was obtained by going to the village teacher to read books. So, do your parents know how to read? Has the teacher ever taught you how to read? Do you usually show literary literacy? If you check it, you will die! Second, whether it's fireworks, chocolate, or antibiotics, you figure it out yourself. How do you figure it out? Where do you usually think? Where do the raw materials come from? You are a poor person and you don't have R&D funds. If you find out, you will die! Third, the salt mine was found by Zhu Gaochi. When buying it, Zhu Gaochi also went through the formalities. After the purchase, Zhu Gaochi was responsible for the initial construction. Wouldn't the person selling the mine know whose background it is? Don't you dare to make any moves unless you find out more about it? Some people must say that you don't need to use your brain when reading. Whoever likes to read books for mentally retarded people should read them. Anyway, I don't read them!

The whole story is quite satisfactory, not bad, and it also explains the causes and consequences of the system (the second part is actually useless). The second part is directly a science fiction novel, and the third part will give you a parallel world that you can't control.

It's okay, the front is great, the back is terrible

It should have a score of 8.5. You can still read it in your spare time. It is a Ming Dynasty novel with a love system. The beginning was quite poor, with too many water characters. I copied modern poetry and used the system to prompt the number of water characters. This situation did not gradually get on track until after 100 chapters. Most of the writing in the middle is actually pretty good. The male protagonist doesn't have a harem, and the time when he travels to the future is a matter of opinion. I personally think that the plot and setting behind it are not good, but others may think it is good.

Is the author tired at the end of writing? Prices have collapsed and there is no way to come back. It's okay to read cool articles in the early stage, but pull them out in the later stage. Watch without thinking, keep your brain, but don't go too far, with a black question mark on your face.

The writing is not good, the plot is confusing, and the writing is confusing. The setting was originally attractive and I was ready to read it. However, the protagonist in the end was too shameless and cheap. He took four to five thousand medicinal materials from others, and then used his power to bully others. There are people who are lower than him and have not offended him. He borrowed the boat, and he offended others because he robbed other people's business and supported the weak by supporting the strong. If the boat is bombed, even if the party that exploded is a bad person, shouldn't you pay compensation? You borrowed the boat, and you asked him to go to that powerful man to ask for compensation. The boat was ruined because he didn't have it. Instead, he just said that he was shameless and that he should be with him. It was bullying him. It was funny. Who was shameless and who bullied whom?