Villain: the School Beauty Mother Helps Me Practice Cultivation

The protagonist talks too much

What kind of rice cake thing is written in the plot of Xiao Zhan?

Being a villain and being ridiculed by a group of people, even little Karami, can only scold and be speechless. It's so childish. It only takes practice to practice it🐶! I feel so depressed when I see it

It's very witty. A villain is ridiculed by a lot of people. It's too 6

What kind of shit is this? I advise you not to read it. How can you be so embarrassed to write this kind of novel and publish it?

Then why did you try so hard to introduce Ni Lin before? In the end, it was useless to tell me. Author, you are a big**, or a bad big**

The plot is confusing, the word count is too high, too much nonsense, the outline is vague, there is no framework for what to write, and many things seem very abrupt. When it comes to the second unit, it is inexplicable and there is no explanation of what happened. The identity and cultivation level of the previous unit are as useless. The evaluation is that AI crawled several novels and combined them into a series.

What the hell are you writing? When Lin Qiye appeared, a demigod was defeated by a grandmaster, an emperor, and a venerable. The role of your realm is useless, and your combat power has collapsed.

What did you write about the second protagonist?

The bird is really good, very smooth