Chuan Shu 80: My Military-Married Parents Read My Heart and Got Mad

It's quite good-looking. The main reason is that the plot and characters are written smoothly without too many descriptions and explanations. The whole article is very comfortable to read. There are no typos or wrong names of characters. It is more suitable for book shortages. The shortcoming is that it is not finished. I hope the author will update more every day🥰

I feel that the writing for the heroine's father is not good at all. He is a soldier, and he is such an adult. He can't understand everything. He has to be reminded by the heroine of everything, and he is stupid as hell. He has nothing but a face. How can a soldier be so stupid? And I feel like he is trying to whitewash this father. Didn't he ignore the heroine before he lost his memory? I'm sorry that I didn't read the whole story, but I really can't stand this father. The heroine and her mother are so miserable. And the most important thing is that the mother is not even in confinement. This father is a lot of trouble and "causes trouble" every day. The heroine came through the fetus to save her mother and herself. This father is really speechless. It's really enough to use that kind of excuse for someone who is much older to clean up his innocence. It's really enough. I even think they should get divorced. My mother is so good, so she has to be paired with such a scumbag. I don't want to be separated.

The ending was too quick, and I could have added some extra chapters.

The ending is that I really didn't expect that what He Jiaxue described before was so good, why did it suddenly change? Even if I wanted to write about the heroine and the hero being together, I wouldn't have eliminated He in this way.

The ending is not good. From the time He Jiaxue appeared, I always thought he was the male protagonist. Who knew that he was written badly? It made me feel uncomfortable. It was really hard to calm down.

The early stage was okay, but the sudden ending was too hasty, He Jiaxue suddenly turned bad, and the ending was too sloppy.

It sucks. The first part is very good, and there are very few typos. I really don't understand the ending at the end. Why did I write it out so quickly?

In order to highlight the heroine's power, her father was not only described as stupid An officer seems to have no brains and no ability. At first, he was rescued by a woman because of his injuries, and also because of his amnesia. He felt at ease living in someone else's house. Knowing that he is a soldier, shouldn't he report to the Public Security Bureau to inquire about any missing officers and try to find his identity? It's okay if it's not written down. By chance, the heroine took her mother and the police to find Shi Because the heroine hugged him back and cried and said that she was wronged, the heroine's father looked at her and said, "I'm here, don't be afraid", and then glared at the heroine's mother (his wife) A person with normal amnesia sees the police coming with someone and a woman holding a child and saying that she is his husband. You should also be skeptical Just because the woman I've been with for a month said something unfair, he glared at the person who might be his wife. Besides, this person was brought by the police Forget it here Because the heroine said something from her heart, his father had a headache and was sent to the hospital. After waking up, my memory has not been restored yet! Suddenly he can stand up for his "wife and children" to deal with his mother and younger brother He even obeyed the heroine and her daughter in every possible way, acting like a good father and husband. At this point, the heroine's father still hasn't recovered his memory! I can't help but wonder, if they accept the heroine and her daughter so easily, what's going on with their actions in the small fishing village? The difference between the characters before and after is huge. In addition, after reading about thirty chapters, the character of the heroine's father changes. When he hears the heroine's rebellious words, he wants to feel sorry for him and help him, and then the heroine's voice brings him back. The plots are all very similar, and the heroine's father is constantly tugging at his heart If I really can't stand it, is there nothing else I can write about?

The ending is really speechless

It's a good write-up, but I still find it annoying to follow it all the way to the end.