I Became a Concubine on the Road to Escape, and I Took My Two Children to Marry the Prince.

Oops, the heroine is so weak and so angry, why can't she deal with the vicious adoptive parents? , Can't you get them some reading? Also, I have been criticized all the way to the capital. I feel so aggrieved to be criticized all the time. After reading your article, I feel bad. The heroine is too weak and has no desire to pursue her. The negative comments make people angry and don't read your stuff.

The heroine is a character who has traveled through time at the end of the world. The result is a weak batch. . . . Even if he kills a person, he uses a hot weapon to follow the ink mark, and he has some bad intentions. The male protagonist is annoying, arrogant and arrogant! The heroine is always being plotted, threatened, and taking risks for people who don't matter. It's really a trap! ! !

The article is very good

How can I put it this way? It seemed pretty good at the beginning. The heroine was capable and smart. But after she saved the hero, she became a person who relied on the hero to survive... The heroine seemed dispensable. She was obviously from the end of the world.

The male protagonist is as if he is sick. He calls the female protagonist to save him. After saving him, he has no doubts about it.

It's very weak, and the male protagonist is made very stupid.

That's so flattering, the character of the heroine is really irritating

The sentences are very fluent, but who is the real protagonist? If it were the current heroine, her character would have collapsed. As mentioned earlier, she was reborn in the apocalypse and had just experienced betrayal. However, not long after she was reborn, she became caring and motherly. Not long after we met, she risked her life to save others. Sometimes she was afraid of this and that, and sometimes she killed minor characters and then she was decisive. On the contrary, it was the original heroine. Although her viciousness was written down in the article, she would be unpredictable and the heroine's aura was particularly bright.

Don't look at it, it's so frustrating. The heroine came from the end of the world. She is so weak that she is like a mute.

The male and female protagonists are really good. A person who was killed in the last days is still such a virgin. The male protagonist is even more so. A prince who has not been reborn. The first one was a concubine whom he married for a few days. Later, he went to the city to give it away. He also said that the female protagonist was cruel and even gave away her own child. You can give birth to such a big child in just a few days. No wonder the previous life was so miserable.