Take the Initiative to Remarry! Crazy Criticism of the Prince Haunts Me to the Bone

The author's writing style is still very good, but after reading it now, I think the first problem is that there is no good connection in the layout of the text. The first few dozen chapters did not include the foreshadowing of the male protagonist and the female protagonist's previous acquaintance, which made the subsequent romance in Xijiang a little awkward. Second, the description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists in the previous article is very fast, giving readers the feeling that they have a good relationship after they have only known each other for a few days. However, there is no foreshadowing of their childhood, which makes it very abrupt and the pace is too fast. Sometimes (when the female protagonist loses her memory in the previous article), the change of the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist is too tortuous. It is good for a while and bad for a while, which is a bit inexplicable. In the end, no matter what shortcomings there are, they are just minor ones. The advantages of this book outweigh the disadvantages! What I would like to commend the author is that the writing is very good. Excellent literary talent! The plot is also very exciting! The content is novel, coherent, and the plot is compact! It's just that the ending was a little rushed, but overall it was good! Come on author

It's quite good to watch, the plot is exciting and the arrangement is reasonable. It's worth watching! Of course, it would be more perfect if two more little dolls are arranged in the ending, haha...

It's quite a good read. The heroine is pretty good. She becomes an ally with the time traveler for the sake of the country. The male protagonist is also good. I read it for too long. I only remembered after reading the book review recommendation and didn't give a review (so I forgot the name of the male and female protagonist＼（_ｏ）／)

Nice. This time-travel novel changes the pattern of revenge after revenge, and has a higher, broader and wider perspective. It is refreshing and worth reading.

The one who was reborn corrected the time-travel, and the one who time-traveled brought modern skills to ancient times, haha, it's so original.

It's a bit long-winded and procrastinating, and the key plot points are scattered!

This one is pretty good-looking, but a little lacking. I haven't seen enough yet.

The plot is quite good, there are no misunderstandings, it's a typical sweet pet story, but there is one hole left unfilled. Murong Xuan didn't investigate why Shen Xiyue didn't remember what happened in Xijiang.

The last few chapters were a little rushed, but the first few chapters were pretty good.

Not bad👍