Lord of the Divine Ruins

Ah, what a boy, a sand tea, it seems to have stabbed the protagonist to death.

A novice, with no logic at all and no brain in writing. Is a ninth-grade family butler a mortal? ? Can a first- and second-grade gangster kill the emperor's relatives? Dandy is not a fool.

The typos are actually okay. The most important thing is that the author's writing direction is a bit off and the wording is a bit inappropriate. The general main line of the story is okay. It's a general routine. It's just that the author can't tell that this world is a world of cultivating immortals.

How should I put it? I've read about a hundred chapters and can't stand it anymore. I originally didn't want to read it when Xia Zhilan was released during the orc attack. But now I'm just discussing life like that. I'm so disappointed. I gave up.

The first third is okay, but the rest is full of loopholes, the preface does not match the follower, the thinking and logic are confusing, and it is disgusting to watch. If you write with care, you will be brilliant even in the ordinary. If you only collect words for money, the road will only become narrower and narrower. Literature carries the Tao and educates sentient beings, which has great merit. The writing is contrary to morality, disturbs people's minds, and is a great crime. Therefore, the ancients were very rigorous in writing books, fearing the cycle of cause and effect and adding disaster to their lives.

It's so embarrassing to watch. . Still killing decisively. . Like licking a dog. All kinds of people were wronged, wronged, etc. This plot should be changed to a heroine story. . The combat power is even worse. . . Especially where he writes about buying black impermanence. The protagonist wears a mask. . Clearly rubbish in combat effectiveness. . Kill all the elites lightly. . . I don't know, I thought you were wearing a mask and you were Emperor Shakti. . . He. Tui

A messy plot. If the male protagonist had such an IQ, would he still be killed on earth? Is there any beautiful woman who you can't fall in love with after traveling through time? Be a saint?

After reading twenty or thirty chapters, I couldn't understand it at all. The world I traveled to was like a fantasy martial arts world for a while, and like a modern world for a while, which made me feel confused.

The plot is good and you can just follow it without thinking. Looking forward to the update.

I read a few chapters across chapters, and the book is very messy and confusing. The book feels very boring, and the plot is very hypocritical. The protagonist is like a robot without emotions. The heroine loves you so much, but you hurt his heart so much, and you are not worthy of being a man. And then the protagonist thinks he is very noble, thinking that you can't have feelings as a human being, just like a robot, and having feelings is garbage. I can only say that the author has a big psychological problem.