Ten Summons from the Start: I Found an Eternal Divine Dynasty

I gave up after seeing Chapter 435 and was not in the mood to read on. I wanted to see something fresh ahead. I came to watch you summon Sun Wukong and Jiang Taixu. As a result, you kept dragging the pace. You didn't complete many tasks and you were always working on forces other than the tasks. You also didn't say what cultivation level the intermediate summoning cards required. You just took a few people to hang out outside. I came to watch you summon for hegemony. Yes, I didn't come here to see you lead a few people to control souls. I really feel that the plot is bland and has no ups and downs. You are just like playing house when others are fighting for hegemony. You go to a place and directly suppress the soul control. Your assembly line is also top-notch. The number of words is also top-notch. Take a look at the panel for a few pages. It's uncomfortable to read. I gave up. I'll give you a so-so for the sake of you writing so much. Bye.

The summoned characters are just decorations, and the summoned army is just decorations. I can take two people with me and go on a trip. If others want to kill me, I can't kill them. Killing them can cause a disaster. Not many of the system tasks have been completed. The ultimate summoning card cannot be used. This one cannot be used, that one cannot be used. I just forcibly lost my mind and gave it up.

It still feels okay, there are some typos, but the plot is fascinating!

I really can't stand it anymore, I thought the characters were summoned to fight for world domination... Haha...! It has reached more than 400 chapters, so I took a few people and wandered around. The content is very different from the title of the novel. Selling dog meat for selling sheep's heads!

The plot is completely slow and the word count is too low. I wrote five to six hundred chapters in half a year, but 70% of the book has not been completed, and every time it is about soul control. Is it because there are so many saved tasks to improve the word count later? There is no difference between getting so many summoning cards and not using them. Summoning more than a dozen people from beginning to end, what kind of brain circuit is this?

The system is a bit rubbish, the word count is serious, and the plot is not enthusiastic enough.

The number of words is so good. You can introduce the plot in the early stage, but you can't stand it if you keep repeating the explanations. And it explains half of the chapter in one sentence, half of the chapter in making a decision, half of the chapter in asking for advice... I didn't see the development, I just brushed it off. The war only included the first confrontation with the barbarian, and there were no highlights. In summary, Hong Tianlei was invincible on the battlefield. The story of Yun Dynasty Hegemony was written as a mixed story with a single protagonist, and there is no one left. After more than 200 chapters, it is boring for the protagonist to take two men and two women out to hang out.

I always fail to remember my cultivation, and end up hastily

The main reason is that there is no story, let alone any storyline, and it does not even have basic novel elements. This kind of book is not actually a novel.

Some people say it looks good, there are so many sailors