Douluo Dalu: From the Start in Slaughter City, Forced to Become a Demon

I originally wanted to give a good review at the beginning, but I wanted to give a bad review when I read the middle and later stages. I felt pretty good at the end, so I wanted to give it an average rating, but after thinking about it, I decided to give it a good review. After all, this book is more intelligent than some Douluo fanfics written about many children and many blessings, and I still want more people to see it. However, there is one sentence, and most of it is really superficial. Just skip it and take a quick look. Unfortunately, we only saw the destruction of the Haotian Sect, and did not see the destruction of the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect, the Blue Lightning Overlord Dragon Sect, and other sects that were hostile to the protagonist. In fact, the author could have written about helping Ning Rongrong upgrade the Nine Treasures Glazed Pagoda and then conquer the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect. I feel that there would be no big logical problem if he wrote it this way. However, maybe according to Ning Fengzhi's character, he might just cooperate and not achieve the final outcome of the unification of the continent, so he didn't write it like this, right? Maybe. The writing style is relatively average, and the writing style of various descriptions really reflects the lack of ink in the author's belly. In the early stage of the killing, he was decisive and killed without saying a word. In the later stage, he was beeping and grinding, and the woman's benevolence was tempered. The enemy beat his own people, and when he persuaded the enemy to retreat, he let them go without killing them. In the early stage, if you don't talk or write, you will kill. In the later stage, you will talk nonsense for several chapters before taking action. It looked okay in the early stage, but the Ju Neng water later was too watery. The full text is 840,000 words. After removing a lot of hydrology and repetition, it should be at most 400,000 words. It's still online. At least Shrek's levels have not improved after intercepting the fairy grass. I just can't stand some of the fans who copy it. Even though they have intercepted the chance, the level of Shrek's talent soul power is still so high. The author writes this quite well. But there are some places that the author forgot about after writing. Bibi Dong watched the protagonist eat fairy grass to reach level 50, and helped the protagonist hunt the soul beast to reach level 55. When they met again later, he asked about the registration and was found to be level 55. The result was surprising. It is a small flaw. If I force the explanation, I don't want the people next to me to know that Bibi Dong has known about it for a long time, but it can only be said to be a forced explanation. The writing is quite rough in some places. The Road to Hell has almost twenty chapters, and the Three-Headed Bat and the Ten-Headed Sun Snake both have ten chapters. Then there are times when the protagonist doesn't appear for many chapters, and there are many situations where it's pretty awkward. Another flaw is that the arm with a soul bone that was chopped off by Tang Hao had no effect on his strength. In the original work, he lost an arm and a leg and dropped level 20. Also, Master Tang San and several other people who want to kill the protagonist are written in many places that are quite uncomfortable and have various strong tastes. The writing at the end was too boring. I spent ten chapters killing a small evil spirit master. I was sick of reading it. There were all kinds of pretense and numerous conversations with passers-by. The early stage of the killing was decisive, but the woman behind it felt uncomfortable. When I saw Douluo, the female soul master in the second scene, she gave the fairy grass to heal her wounds. Junior sister Hu Liena, her savior Tang Yuehua, and the second teacher Liu Erlong refused to give the fairy grass. In the end, they only started to share the fairy grass with themselves after giving it to others. The force groups that oppose the Wuhun Temple unite to fight against the Wuhun Temple forces, and then the friends and forces around the protagonist, including the Wuhun Temple forces, are disunited, self-doubtful, self-divided, and disobedient to manage various things.

No wonder no one is watching. You are Bibi Dong's student. Instead of going back to Wuhun Hall after you are injured, you go to Liu Erlong's academy and insist on quarreling with Tang San. Moreover, Tang Hao also wants to kill you.

Author, I feel like you plagiarized the plot related to Yuehua and Bibi Dong? I have read a book that is similar to this one. The man is a killer and very cold, and Yuehua also persuades him to smile more. Although your plot is a little different, this aspect is almost exactly the same as that one.

The more I read the article, the more speechless I become. Everyone in the article is like a fool. The main character in the harem has always been a eunuch, right? All the pornographic waste in his mind is written on Tang San. Is there something wrong with the author xp? No, you can find another class.

I've read several Douluo fanfics, and this one is okay. I don't feel ashamed. It's pretty good.

It was so messy. In the beginning, Bibi Dong had a fight with Tang Chen and then escaped. Later, a series of things with Tang San felt so messy. Tang San's character looked particularly uncomfortable. It was different from the original work and felt uncomfortable to watch (I am not a Tang San fan). The story line was also inconsistent, and it inexplicably changed a lot of people's personalities.

It is recommended to bring back the protagonist's system

It makes me sad to see

2026.01.25 16:26. There is no heroine. It should be said that there is a heroine but she doesn't look like a heroine. Bad ending. Coming in from the multi-heroine label. 2. After the system gives the newbie a gift package, he runs away. There is some growth in 54 and 78, and the insignificant plot is brushed aside. 99 This is a novel in which Bibi Dong obtains the Xiao Wu soul ring. No. 163 Takes off, 164 tears, 277 is too big, 318 is a bit heavy and requires imagination)

The author always forgets the character of the protagonist.