After Financial Freedom

The first third was pretty good, but the more I looked at the back, the more distressing I became. I pulled out 45%.

The beginning is great, very close to real life! After it was put on the shelves, it was all about how rich people live, how they enjoy life, and how they enjoy beautiful women, so the evaluation is average.

The early works were very realistic, and the character description was perfect. The emotional woman was a commercial failure. It's a pity that the start of the masterpiece was just average.

I can't understand the jade bracelet worth more than 1 million yuan given to my mother. A rural person, does she understand? Funny

I make money in the futures market every day, but I can't bear to quit my job and continue to work for others. I take orders and break through intermediary companies. The company I bought for 700,000 yuan donates 30 to 40 million yuan for publicity. What kind of brain circuit can do such a thing? It gives me a headache 😣

It's just a counter-attack story. It has to insert emotional scenes, and it's written in an ambiguous way. The main tasks are all written as auxiliary tasks. When you feel you need money, do it. The rest of the time, you just have affairs with women.

There are too many side details and useless narratives, and the character creation is too poor. For example, Susan wants and wants again. When she has no money, she wants a rich life. When she has money, she is unhappy and feels empty. Maybe this kind of character exists in reality, but brother, who would experience it in a novel like yours? They will only think that you are pretentious and long-winded, making this kind of woman unlikable.

How can I put it this way? It's a lick for the nouveau riche. It's rare to see a time-traveling protagonist lick it. This is a book.

It's just mindless writing, the character changes back and forth, and it collapses to the extreme.

Very average. Very average. The poison has subsided.