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The previous part was okay. Although I felt that the world view of the Immortal Sword was a bit outrageous, I could still watch it. I couldn't stand it when I reached Zhetian. The combat power of Zhetian was a bit broken. I couldn't watch it when I saw that the golden elixir could touch porcelain in the fourth-level secret realm. The author wrote earlier that the golden elixir was so weak that it could kill him with one breath in the four-pole secret realm, and it was still at the same level.

The combat power is pure nonsense, with a bunch of settings, and I have no idea at the beginning. I just copy the gourd and copy it, and I only copied it to a five-point level. But when I consider it, it's Tomato. The sentences are fluent and the story can be told clearly, so it's considered above average. Forage-

After arriving at Zhetian, I just wrote randomly, and it was completely inconsistent.

The plot is a mess

The plot of Fairy Sword is about Lin Yueru falling in love with the protagonist, which is quite unbearable.

Is this writing messy?

The writing is a bit self-centered. Even your earthly immortal physique and imperial weapons cannot break it. Come to cover the sky? Even though you know Mark Ye Fan's fate and you still talk nonsense, it really belongs to you! This book is poisonous, I advise you to abandon it.

If there is a plot about giving a girl away, I don't recommend it. You can watch it🐮

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