Douluo of the Spirit Treasure

The novel is quite good, but it doesn't meet the needs. When reading about Douluo fandom, I think most of them are aimed at torturing Tang San, so I don't feel at all when I see how the protagonist becomes invincible later on. Just talking about how to practice is not interesting at all.

The writing is quite good, but the previous part is a bit complicated. The order of the heroines is: Shui Bing'er, Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, Xiao Wu, Ning Rongrong, Hu Liena, A Yin (A Lan), Ya Fei, Medusa

It's quite good-looking. It's better than any Douluo fanfic I've read. The writing style is also very delicate. Tang San's character is not ruined either. It's worth recommending.

Has the author never seen a woman? I saw a woman who couldn't walk

It's not bad, but it feels like it's drifting in the later stage. Also, what the hell is that ending of yours? Is it crazy?

I read more than 40 chapters, and I didn't see who the protagonist was. The protagonist took a group of orphans, and after the orphans awakened their martial arts spirits, they were all innate level 3 and 4. The protagonist's own upgrade and growth were not described at all. The protagonist's own affairs were all brushed aside, and they were all about the growth of his orphans and supporting characters. I was speechless. I couldn't tell who the protagonist was at all. The protagonist is like the golden finger of these orphans. If you want to write about multiple people, then just write I just brushed over the other ones. I came here to read about the protagonist and the title. So far, the protagonist has been helping his people to think of ways to improve and create formations. Please, you are writing about Douluo Continent, are you writing around the theme line? It seems that these 40-odd chapters together with Douluo Continent factors are difficult. Two chapters about the protagonist's own growth are difficult, and they are all about the younger brother. After reading the first few chapters, I thought it was another readable book, but I didn't expect it to be like this.

High emotional intelligence: It is written with great care, great detail, and a lot of originality. Low emotional intelligence: It's really complicated, the cost of understanding is too high, and it doesn't meet the needs. When reading fan fiction, you just have to read it quickly and have fun. However, the main theme of this book has become a bunch of original characters experimenting with an original training system in the Douluo world, and it is so complicated that the first hundred or so chapters cannot be understood unless you calm down and think about it. The character of the male protagonist is that of a scientific research maniac, and he is almost only interested in research. He doesn't bother with other things, and the female character has to work hard to cheat. Later, I traveled to several other worlds, but with only a few dozen chapters, this was really a speed run.

I was baffled by the last five chapters!!!!

It's pretty good. The writing is neither bragging nor slanderous. The protagonist's IQ is online.

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