Life Vip System

It's obviously a life VIP, but it's all messed up after writing it.

Killing decisively is an irony, and the writing should be more bold. It would be better to write several women directly to death. Each of the women seems to have an affair with the protagonist and seems to have nothing to do with it. There are many little fairies. If it weren't for the writing, I would have given up on it long ago. The author consistently implements the concept of not refusing or taking responsibility.

First of all, let's talk about some of the bad points. In fact, overall I think the plot is pretty good in terms of pace and character, but there are a few things that I just can't stand. First: This system is too oppressive. I have read more than two hundred chapters. The first level of the system mall has only been unlocked and can only be redeemed for a very basic low-level martial arts skill, which cannot be exchanged. Then, one hundred experience points are required to upgrade to one level every day. Two attribute points. Can't it be simpler and clearer? Suppressing combat power is too harsh Second: I don't understand what the male protagonist's character is? Over two hundred chapters have passed and there have been a lot of women. They are all stunning, but I have not slept with any of them. If you are writing about a harem, don't make it so serious. If you are not writing about a harem, don't have a lot of female characters surrounding you every day. The characters are too vague and the emotional lines are too complicated. I don't know how to deal with it.

What was it written about? It was a mess. I read a few chapters and gave up.

I urge you to drink another glass of wine. There is no old friend when you leave Yangguan in the west.