Metropolis: Qin Shihuang Cheated Him Out of 300 Yuan at the Beginning

What is this? It's a mess and it can still be recommended, but you get paid for pissing?

I can't say, the theme of the opening is not decided yet, it's about superpowers, making money, campus feelings, it's a hodgepodge, there's no central theme, and it's ink, the protagonist's character is systematic but his vision is very short-sighted, he doesn't know what the mainstream is, he's been threatened, and he hasn't learned anything about formal security, he keeps talking about things in the dormitory, I don't understand why this kind of book can be recommended, it can be said that it was very confusing before chapter 30.

It's fine in the front, but it starts to get abstract later.

If only the protagonist has the ability, it would be a great novel. But there are awakened people everywhere, and it feels uncomfortable to look at them, as if everyone has a system. This was doomed when I was writing the outline, plus it was watery and ink-stained. After reading dozens of chapters, I still didn't find a heroine. I just chatted with my roommates all day long. How can I get a better understanding of it? Not enough ideas! Brother!

The plot is too rubbish

The ending is pure bullshit

I don't know how to get recommendations, the early system, the mid-term abilities, the writing is messy

The opening theme is profitable, the mid-term mutation is powerful, and the final phase is even more unproblematic, with a title party.

The writing is so messy that I don't even know what it is about! No central theme

In fact, what I wrote earlier is quite good, but it's so bad. It's a pity, it's a pity.