The Taoist Who Began in The Outcast

The protagonist's system is useless and useless. It depends entirely on the protagonist's halo to fully fill up his comprehension points, making him semi-invincible when he goes down the mountain. Then he kills Tian and then pretends to ask a heavenly master to come down the mountain for revenge? ? ? ? ?

It's a good read, but I've only seen Chapter 61. I only want to read the domestic part. I'm almost invincible at home and I still go to an island country to learn ninja. It's boring, so I gave up.

The writing is too poor and the plot is told too quickly, like a running account.

How can I say that the author did not read Under One Person? The time was confused. When he came out of the mountain, there were still a few years before the plot started. However, Zhang Lingyu was broken when he arrived at Longhu Mountain, and then he went to Wudang Mountain and the plot started right after he came out? Moreover, Lu Liang did not go to Quanxing because of the Lu family, but because of his own nature, because the Lu family was just an excuse.

One word, chaos. The story is messy, many have been told in a hurry, and there is too much water. The combat strength in the middle is also unclear. It feels like there is no outline, just write wherever you think.

It's okay, nothing outstanding.