Stay in the Portable World

How should I put it, the failed book explains what it means to have limited abilities, not worthy of being a son of the plane, and wasted a good hand.

The plot does not match the concept.

It's okay at the beginning, but then it becomes very cliche.

Too salty! ! So verbose! ! The more I watch, the angrier I get! ! Not for me! ! 886

It's too watery and full of nonsense. I fast forwarded through dozens of chapters and I just couldn't stand it.

The author doesn't know how to write about women, and none of them are cute.

It started okay! In the middle, he still pretends to be aloof and just acts like a dog-licker.

The first part was fine, but after more than a hundred chapters it wasn't. Completely different from the introduction