A Salty Fish's Life That Begins at Night

I feel that the character creation of the protagonist is very successful, yes it is very successful, but it is a character that I hate and don't understand very much. I can't understand the way the protagonist behaves, or the core of saying one thing and doing another. If you say one thing and do another for others to see, I can understand it, but to the reader who has a God's perspective, saying one thing and doing another is very incomprehensible. It seems to be shaping the protagonist's character, but it is indeed the author's character. Very annoying.

If you are a salty fish, just be a salty fish. You keep saying that you are a salty fish, but what you do is inconsistent with your words and deeds.

Are you writing a book from heaven?

So much nonsense

To be honest, the whole novel is filled with a lot of inner activities and insights which is quite unnecessary. The narrative points and story highlights are very impressive. There is a sense of déjà vu after reading the same text. To put it bluntly, the writing of the main plot is not entirely based on inner activities and feelings. I read half of it and really lost interest.

I have finished reading the part about Jiang Ye, and barely read a little of the later ones. I feel that the author is not yet mature enough. He needs to improve his writing skills to write this kind of post-invincible casual article.

The protagonist's personality is messy, his emotional line is inexplicable, and his writing is extremely clumsy.

I always feel like this book is full of nonsense and I don't even know what to write about. There is no main plot and the protagonist has no personality. In a word, there is nothing

There are too many monologues, and only two or three monologue chapters will have non-monologue content. Too tired to watch.

The writing is really not good. Is the main character mentally ill?