Ambition Lord

Well! This novel is very well written, why isn't it updated?

The subject matter is good, but the author didn't write it well, so it looks boring. After reading many chapters, there is no emotional drama between men and women, and it is boring to watch a group of big men.

Pretty good. Be cautious, lay a solid foundation, and make steady progress step by step.

It was okay at first, but when I saw Shinsuke using contract plants, I was speechless😓You said that human intervention can be used to upgrade! Well, you intervened and got promoted to a level, then what? The growth cycle of the plant itself is slow and you still need to introduce it. ． ． ． ． ．

Overall it's okay, but it's not well written. Please tell me what can be improved. 1. As for the protagonist's plug-in, it's actually not some outrageous plug-in, it's just a search engine. It can be fully developed. If you participate more in the plot, it won't appear too excessive. There is no sense of existence in the book. I only wrote it when I thought of it. Regarding the "luck" that needs to be consumed, I don't know what it is related to. Is it the territory area, the territory population, or the reputation of the lord? As a result, it is not enough every time it is used 2. Regarding magical plants, their role in the book is too simple. The setting can be enriched to make it more distinctive. 3. Regarding the protagonist, overall he is okay and has a normal IQ. Although there is no strategy, it does not reduce his intelligence. Sometimes when using plug-ins, he always wastes his "luck" on things that are useless to him at the time, which is completely useless.

Very good, very good. This book is quite good.

It's well written, but it's a pity it's unfinished. .