Doomsday (Welfare Article)

The author's writing style is pretty good among online articles, at least better than many authors with ratings above 8.5, But the article looks a bit boring. I gave up after reading more than 20 chapters. I felt like I was running away all the time, and there was no ability upgrade. It was like playing a game without clearing the level setting. Walking in the maze for several hours was boring. Moreover, the heroine is like a luminous body that automatically attracts many people to fall in love with her and worship her for no reason. She has parents who have to travel thousands of miles to save her, and others have no father or mother and want nothing more than to follow her. This kind of Mary Sue setting (although I have not seen love yet, they are all of the same or opposite sex who are impressed by her personal charm, and those who are not convinced want to blaspheme her) have been really unpleasant and annoying in the past two years.

Why write about feelings, in the end, a big failure?

It was okay at the beginning. The heroine was very calm and prepared everything and returned home quickly. However, the heroine picked up people all the way and was a bit like a virgin. Moreover, the male protagonist's charade collapsed. He was originally a righteous person, but he fell in love with the heroine after seeing him a few times. He was stubborn and stubborn. Can you consider the background of the apocalypse? The emotional line is inexplicable. Let's just say that there is no need to write the emotional line. It is better not to have such a confusing emotional line. I abandoned the article, but the writing is okay.

In order to highlight the halo of the protagonist, the military only used simple firearms without even a bomb. In order to highlight the protagonist's ability to save mankind, facing four zombies, all of the more than a hundred people turned out to be cowards. Anyway, just waiting for the protagonist to save him. I looked at it all the way with diarrhoea. The author's writing is actually pretty good, but the plot setting is hard to describe in just one sentence.

The male protagonist is so greasy and narcissistic, so disgusting! When facing the heroine, he doesn't look like a soldier at all. He looks like a gangster with powerful powers. He kisses her and talks seductively whether he likes it or not.

The embarrassment of the greasy male protagonist falling in love with the female protagonist for no reason😓

Just pass the time and watch. There is nothing exciting about it. People who come back 15 years after the apocalypse still make stupid mistakes.

It's so funny that the heroine's hometown is the same as mine

It's very beautiful, but there are actually negative reviews. It seems that everyone has different preferences.

A bit grindy