Nine Star Divine Dragon Technique

How come repairing a gun was changed to repairing a sword silently?

Too many typos? This book has yet to be evaluated 👎

It's a rubbish party, the reviews are so good that there are no words to say, and the trolls are showing off the nonsense. It's nonsense that goes around and around for several rounds. It feels like if if if if if if means the same thing. To put it bluntly, it's endless if on the road.

There are a lot of things that I finish writing as soon as I write them. The plot is written in a way that makes me impatient to read and listen to it. Many things are wrong from beginning to end, and may end up in the stage of torture of life and death. Keep writing.

Well written.

Novels are always deliberately ridiculing and slapping people in the face. I feel that this way of writing is very childish.

It's a mess, the author's thinking is confusing!

I abandoned the book decisively when I saw the repetition at the beginning.

Too many typos! Writing style needs to be improved

It looks good, but the update is a bit slow.