I Add Some Attributes to the Urban World

The early stage was quite good, but the biggest failure was the large amount of foreshadowing between the protagonist and the teacher. The teacher's daughter was set as a heroine, and the readers were emotionally invested. They were all looking forward to the future development. Suddenly, a third party, a passerby, moved next to the hero. After a few days of interaction, they had sex and became the heroine. I was also drunk. It was like a third party intervened. I don't know what the author thought. If you don't fill in this pit, you will definitely get a 3-star negative review. Now that we are all the protagonists, can you be a bit more arrogant and find a passerby girl? Is it because you have low self-esteem or something?

If you don't have a good brain, don't write data flow...

The plot is a bit bland, unattractive, and the logic is not rigorous enough.

What is this thing about? Go study first, read it for a few years and then write a book.

Let me take it easy. I was still working overtime in the front, but I became invincible in the back.

The plot is very bland and has no highlights.

After reading more than 80 chapters, I still immersed myself in hard work. I didn't have much enthusiasm to jump into it. I became a god later. This "evolution" is too "magical" and is not ordinary.

So-so!

It's not bad. You can read it to kill time. The front is too fast, but the back is too tight. It's a bit fast. I could have written dozens more chapters. It's okay.

Not to mention it's pretty!