The Immortal Dao Ancestor: Raising the Willow God

It was interesting at first, but it collapsed after chapter 100. Your best friends are all seeking revenge for you regardless of danger, but the protagonist hides like a dog shark, putting the people closest to you in danger. This is just a cool article, not a dark and realistic article. If you write such a cool article, what kind of audience do you want to read it?

Emmm, how should I put it? I felt that it was so exciting later that the author couldn't imagine what Daluo Tianxian could do. Starting from the real fairyland, the realm was meaningless. It was the collapse of the combat power system. Of course, it can be said that the path was not right. The protagonist of the book was not injured, and the longevity tree The setting of endless vitality is only reflected in the life span, and then no one in the whole book knows that it is an immortal tree, so this setting is meaningless. In the early stage, it is okay to be forbearing and occasionally take action, but in the later stage, pure killing changes too much. It feels like there is a gap between the five qi and the true immortal, and there is a gap in time. If it is written well, it will be okay. There is a former apprentice who pursues Li Changsheng, and then Li Changsheng pursues his apprentice. However, due to the length and the author's skills, the last 25% of the content is like writing a running account. There is no relationship between resisting the evil immortal and the Taoist. This matter has no meaning from the beginning, but the early writing is very grand. What exactly is the evil immortal? Well, I don't know why it appears. It's obviously a rational creature but it's sold by the pound like an item. It's a pure villain. Emmm, I really liked the early plot. I'm curious about what kind of monster disciples the protagonist can raise by faking his own death, and the thrill of revealing his identity, but the writing in the later stages is not good.

As you can see from the front, what kind of stuff is written after pretending to be dead? Also, given the author's ability to write about this world, don't touch Porcelain. Is it worthy? It's not on the same level at all. It's not even an immortal. It can easily mix the magic of those saints and semi-saints in the ancient world.

It's depressing to watch, and the main character seems useless.

The beginning is quite innovative, but as it goes on it gets worse and worse, long and smelly. There are also a lot of loopholes. I originally wanted to read it as a fun article, but the main character is often useless, so there is no fun at all. Also, the length of the article is very boring.

😅😅😅I instantly disliked the word "Emperor" when I saw it. Later on, I don't know if the author burned it out or if someone else wrote it, oh no! Cake! Through! Got it! When I was disgusted by the word "emperor", there was someone in the comment section who didn't know the meaning of these two words. They thought I was confused, hahahaha, I have no choice but to take jujube pills.

In the early stage, the qualifications are low, so the protagonist is always lower than others and timid, I admit it! In the later stage, the protagonist repeats his own heel. He has the strongest qualifications, but his level is still lower than others! Cao!!

It was quite a rush starting from Chengxian Road, but fortunately it was relatively smooth in the end.

The first 100,000 words of this book may be original, but the latter is more integrated, including Immortal Ni, Fengshen, Douluo Continent, Swallowing Starry Sky, and can be seen in various novels.

The division of realms is so bad. Jin Dan is the leader of the sect, so why are all the ones in the higher realms as you go to the back? There is nothing low-level, it is too ugly to watch.