Take the Primitive Tribe with You

The theme is good and relatively new, but there is a lot of gossip and the writing is not smooth and concise enough. The ring should be the highlight, but it was not fully utilized and became useless. In addition, the character of the protagonist should not be limited to the limitations of remote rural areas. After all, he is a high school graduate, making him look naive and silly as if he is out of touch with society. The story will be more exciting if the plot is larger and the level is higher.

The writing is so mind-numbing that I can't stand it anymore.

With such a good golden finger, I can't do my job every day.