Dongzhang in the Divine Eagle

I feel that it is one of the best among the Shendiao fanfics. It has a single heroine but no stud, so I found this one. Otherwise, there is too little written about the original work of Shendiao. There are always regrets in the original work of Shendiao. Isn't reading fanfic just to make up for some regrets, so I haven't read "The Continuation". The plot logic of this novel is reasonable and smooth. It can be regarded as an invincible novel but not brainless. It can also be seen from the book that the author has indeed read the original work. The character descriptions are very vivid and have their own characteristics. Personally, I feel this is the best of the Shendiao fandom so far.

I can only say that the subject matter of this novel is quite attractive, Wuxiang Jiezhi, Nine Yang Magic. As a result, I saw that the protagonist can only hold a broken knife, and use his own unsystematic method to kill people. I don't know why, but it is quite uncomfortable. I want to read it but don't want to read it. After a few pages, I want to read other novels, and then I can't help but read this one, but I can't stand it.

The first time I rescued someone, it became clear that there was a big problem. The protagonist is a positive character. And crushed everyone at the time. Don't wait until someone is seriously injured before helping. There is a big problem with this character. Not only will the enemy be disgusted, but if the person being rescued cannot pick it up clearly, there will be an additional enemy for no reason. Also, in order to show the protagonist's open-mindedness, he refused to take a bunch of money because it was too troublesome, and he was penniless. So disgusting.

Not bad, but some details are not very beautiful? 1. Regarding Yang Guo's life experience, everyone accused him of going evil, but no one told him the reason why his father died. 2. The reason for the final battle is a bit confusing But overall it's okay

I have only read 50 chapters. I have a few questions and you can read it if you can accept it. 1. The protagonist is obviously a modern person who traveled through time, but the way he handles problems is like a child. 2. The way many supporting characters are handled is careless. (Personally I think the biggest problem) Supporting characters currently appearing include: The chef who took him to Henan at the beginning, the protagonist himself knew how dangerous the journey was, but ended up letting him go back without making proper arrangements after arriving. The protagonist meets the brothers and sisters after he develops his martial arts skills. It is inexplicably written that the brother was tortured until he was half dead before the protagonist appears. Later, he said that he felt that there was a master spying on him to find someone else (pure patching) Then the perspective inexplicably switched to meeting Lao Ma (I thought he was a master of hiding, and the description was also in the mist), but then he turned around and Lao Ma was beaten to death because of the fish and firewood sent by the protagonist. Good guy, the protagonist happened to be away. Then he wrote about selling his daughter. After a bunch of inexplicable and detailed descriptions, the protagonist met and rescued him. What's even weirder here is that the protagonist actually let go of a thug who worked for the slave owner. The rescued person was sent back to his parents. The parents themselves sold him. It's so cool.

The writing is pretty good for a fanfic, and the descriptions of the fighting are remarkable. But the plot is not reasonable. Did you sneak into the ancient tomb just as you asked? Especially at the end, the No. 1 In the world returns to seclusion with beauty. Forcibly assigning an opponent to the protagonist, Lu Guhong, who has Jiuyin, innate skills, and an old naughty boy to assist him. He has not yet developed, so there is no reason to take the initiative to provoke the protagonist. I was very disappointed after watching it. The beginning was good, but it's a pity.

No matter how you look at the name of pig's trotter, it sounds like a child's life, and there is no sense of substitution.

I haven't written a book review for a long time, and I can't stand this parallel novel. 1. The plot is confusing, with a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. I don't know what to do. 2. There is a problem with the plot setting, the writing style is lj, the first part is the temple destruction. Everyone is obviously together. I had to see the female senior brother who was seriously injured and had her hand cut off, and slowly came out to save people. It's obvious that it can prevent good people from getting hurt, but they are just showing off for the sake of showing off. 3. Inexplicable writing about dead people That old man, Lao Ma, the protagonist is obviously practicing nearby, but it is written that the protagonist cannot come back. Just write it to death. It's not like there's anything holding him back. The writing is so bad that I don't even know what the meaning of this paragraph is.

The author should be in a state of narcissism and self-hypnosis when writing a book. At least he should read it after he has finished writing it. The whole article is nonsense, with no description of characters or situations. It is not as good as written by AI.

The ending was hasty, and the whereabouts of many people were not mentioned. Also, the protagonist said many times that he would kill Jinlun Dharma King, but in the end he was allowed to escape without pursuing him. By the end of the movie, he was still alive and well. When describing Qinggong, I always mention the mention of two people crossing the top of the wall in the original work of Xiao Long Nu. It is mentioned 3 or 4 times. Wang Chongyang's saying "During the Double Ninth Festival, he is not weaker than others" is also mentioned every time. It makes me tired of reading. The number of words is not that bad, right?