Revival: The Empress Reincarnates as My Daughter!

What I say here may be a lot longer, a bit unpleasant, and a bit uncomfortable, but this is my impression as a reader. Please be patient and read it. I also hope that the author can read it. Thank you! (After all, it took me two hours to summarize, and it's not easy o(*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)o. If you don't like it, don't comment. Save your life. Thank you!! ) I read the entire novel carefully and completely. There are many excellent points. The content of the previous story was the most attractive to me at the beginning, which is also the reason why I was able to read it completely. If there are readers who want to read it, it is still good, but there is still a premise (I won't say the "premise" for fear of affecting the author). The following is the main text. I want to complain about "hundred million" things. Please read it patiently. (There is a twist at the end) After reading it from beginning to end, I can only say that this kind of novel is wrong. The world view is not chaos, but random modification. There is not much connection between the world view before the first hundred chapters and the world view in the next hundred chapters. Aren't there 82 kings in front of you? There is really no mention of the 82 Heavenly Kings later on, just like the 82 Heavenly Kings never existed, and there is no intention to fill in the huge pit about the 82 Heavenly Kings. There is also Li Ruobing. The previous plot clearly stated that she was a reborn modern Frost Empress, with memories of the present and the future that will happen. Later, it was said that she was the Frost Empress of ancient times. She had companions with the King of Heaven in ancient times. In ancient times, she led humans to fight against the ancient beast gods and died. She has both an ancient life experience and memories, as well as a modern life experience and memories. She knows everything about what will happen in the future. She has also been beaten, tricked, and contacted by forces such as the Destiny Army, the Angels of the West, and the Gathering Organization in the past and modern times. The previous plots all indicate that she was a modern person in her previous life, and the following plots all indicate that she was a person from ancient times, and it does not say that she is a modern person who has traveled to ancient times. It only says that she is reincarnated or reborn, and there are only two lives. Whether the previous life was ancient or modern is very confusing. This life is the life of the protagonist Li Xiu's daughter. So Li Ruobing is the biggest pitfall of this novel. From the perspective of the world view of the novel, Li Ruobing's life experience is the most fundamental connection that directly affects the world view. Although I don't know if she is the heroine, and I can't tell for sure, and the author doesn't say, but she is still the most influential person on the world view, and she was written in such a mess. And where is the other daughter, Li Laner? Did the author forget that she is a Canglong? (Although the author did not explain that she was a Canglong, she followed Li Xiu in the beginning because Li Xiu had Canglong blood integrated into his body and had a Canglong body, which gave Li Laner a sense of intimacy. She also had a certain connection with the other Canglong. According to the description, the strength of the other Canglong was in Yuan Dynasty. The prime ten price or higher, is this unclear? Li Lan'er is a Canglong? I always thought that Li Laner could turn the tide during the critical period. And from Li Laner to Li Xiu, he has really become an ordinary kid who only has fast speed, and the author is not fooled by this. There are still a lot of pitfalls that are endless to list, and they are really not filled at all. The writing is really poor, there are a lot of useless descriptions and nonsense, just like trying to make up the word count, and there are a lot of typos. But! ! ! ! ! If the author really just wrote casually and didn't care about the novel, then I didn't say anything. But! If you are serious, I hope you can see your own shortcomings and deficiencies clearly, so that you can make progress and improve, and bring you more benefits! In fact, the reason for this is because I like this novel. I hope the author can understand that he is not belittling you, but I hope you can change it a bit. Failure is success, mother (it doesn't seem to have failed, and I can't say it failed, but...)

The first hundred chapters are fine, but after the middle, there are a lot of typos or names changed, and the top part does not follow the next part. A lot of possible plots are jumped out of nowhere, and the ink is messed up and messed up. If it is just written for fun, then forget it. If you take it seriously, you need to be serious. Above.

Chapter 100 and the previous 100 chapters are as if they were written by different people. The vulgar and brainless pretense and slap in the face are repeated over and over again. It's just a simple substitution of people. What happens after Chapter 100 is disappointing.

Did you eat the author's butterfly? Didn't it mean that it takes three days to hatch? Why haven't I seen the protagonist to get it for more than three days? Are you planning to give it away? Everything must be done from beginning to end. They said the incubation is completed in three days, so what's the point of not picking it up after three days?

My daughter's appearance is a bit sparse

It became more and more confusing in the later period, with too many typos.

It may take less than a month to reach level 8 to level 10 in one week, which is too fast. You have to remember that it took five years for you to reach extraordinary. You have to say that you are not in a hurry to bear the burden.

The plot is a bit confusing, there are too many typos, and sometimes the ending cannot tell the difference between east, west, east and west. If you don't watch it so carefully, it's okay.

The more I watch, the less I can stand it, and I have nothing to complain about.

Cumbersome, confusing