My Old Bacon Is Back!

This book makes all the mistakes that similar novels should make. After getting the system, he hooked up with his sister-in-law. I still have no connection with my ex-wife. People must learn to make choices. It's enough to sing and write novels, but what kind of variety shows are you going to do?

I have read nearly half of it. As a fast food article, it should be said that it is pretty good, better than more than 90% of similar articles about Seven Cats. In terms of character creation, several main characters are newly created, without using earthly vests. But the secondary characters are almost committing the old problem of similar literature, using the method of using earthly people to put on vests. For example, in "Longing for Life", He, Huang, Sang, and Zhao are the earth's He Jiong, Huang Lei, Song Dandan, and Zhao Benshan. Not even the surname has been changed, the characters and backgrounds are exactly the same. This is what I hate the most. Since the historical background of the earth we travel to is completely different, why do stars from the earth have to appear? Can't you re-create the character yourself? No matter how difficult the novel is, it should not be difficult for the author to create more characters! The reason why they still use earth stars is that the author is lazy and fools the readers. Fortunately, there are no Earth works, otherwise a large number of readers would abandon the book!

The plot idea is very good. The plot of five thousand years of China deeply touched me. I slowly started to narrate it and it became more exciting. The author's own concepts are very good.

Okay, watch it without thinking

There are too many poisons, and there are many things that even a ten-year-old child knows, but the author does not understand!

Yes, it looks good. The songs are all popular songs written by everyone. The novel has moved five thousand years of China to Blue Star, and has moved thousands of Tang and Song Dynasty poems to the capital. Journey to the West, Three Kingdoms, Water Margin, Dream of Red Mansions, detective science fiction novels, and various popular variety shows, the earth is ready for you to move.

It feels great,

This routine is too old. If you write about entertainment, you can still read it. You have to add all kinds of love and hatred with your ex-wife into it, making it nondescript. The latter is more or less like a dog licker. The various lickers who have both sides are really a bit disgusting, and some of the plots are so wild and unconstrained that you can't imagine them.

The writing is too watery

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