Daily Life of a Cyber Magician

There is a lot of urban content, but very little magic content. The limited number of magic tricks are either directly copied from some well-known magic tricks, or they are very abstract, and the descriptions are relatively undetailed. The most important thing is less. The plot feels a bit messy, and it's obvious that I really like ambush and want to write a lot of good characters, but I'm not very successful in realizing it. It's not a very long article to begin with, but it's a bit watery. Another point is that being the Riddler is an outdated way of foreshadowing, especially since many riddles cannot appear at the same time, otherwise it will become confusing and the plot line will not be clear.

Good looking but not hot

Very nice

The first half is okay, but there are too many changes in the middle, making it very difficult to read. If it doesn't work in the middle, you can abandon it. The ending at the end is a bit bland, but overall it's okay.

So what is the significance of the Y-shaped mecha? What is outside the lonely city? Where is the lonely city? Okay, I still have some good questions.

The sudden change into a smiling face in Chapter 194 was the biggest failure. I was a little confused when I saw this, so I gave up.

Is this ending a bad ending?

I can't stand Chapter 27 anymore, the description is messy

Let me talk about the ending first. I think it sucks. Outside the isolated city, all of them are aberrants, and they all listen to what others say. The ending was very hasty. I just told the people around me and the rest was completed at the speed of light without any major pitfalls.

The subject matter is nice, but the writing skills are deducted. This story would be easier to understand if it were written from the beginning in a straightforward way. However, the author wanted to create a suspense challenge, starting from the neck, and halfway through, he would narrate what happened in front of him, causing the protagonist to suddenly jump to " "Smiley face", the swapping of friendly and enemy sides gives the reader the feeling that a lot of emotions are wasted, it is very abrupt, and after the protagonist's position is clear, the author does not give a sufficient motive, which makes the protagonist very inexplicable and trying to make a big deal out of it. This subject matter and story background would be very interesting if the story were told seriously. Unfortunately, the details that should be explained carefully are not explained clearly. The trivial matters are mixed with water, and the holes are dug without filling them. It can only be regarded as an above-average book. It is a book that can be read.