Join Hands to Cultivate the Path to Immortality

It favors boys over girls, and makes the heroine too silly and sweet, who can only act coquettishly, and doesn't like treating girls like girls.

The heroine has no highlights. . So weak. .

The writing style was too colloquial, and the modal particles seemed to be absent. I didn't like it very much, so I stopped reading.

It gets more and more confusing as it goes on, and the same goes for the language. There are too many modal particles and too many repeated words. Are they used to express the cuteness of the heroine? But I looked very embarrassed. The heroine is so weak that she feels at ease, she can only act coquettishly and cutely, so why not cultivate herself into an immortal?

The preface doesn't match the subtitles, the heroine is so weak

Ber Is the author a male? Why is the female protagonist so weak that she can only act cute? What kind of spoiled wife literature? -_-||I can't speak anymore, I'm so speechless.

How can I put it this way? This book gave me the feeling that it was tasteless and it was a pity to abandon it. In fact, the plot was okay, but the author's writing was too bland and I always wanted to abandon the article.

This style of writing is so depressing, and it's so detailed that I can't stand it.

The heroine can only act coquettishly. This kind of fairy tale is really meaningless if it doesn't have a big heroine. I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. I feel like the author is still very young.

The sentences are not fluent