American Drama World Adventure

I have read half of this book and would like to express my personal opinion. In the early stage, when I was writing back and forth between Ice and Fire and the main world, it was okay and still readable. However, after I got the gift of death from the evil force, it became messy. The improvement of my strength was also messy, so much so that it made the world of ice and fire a mess. I put all kinds of strange monsters in it, and then I didn't want to care about it. I cut down other people's trees, and others had no place to enjoy the shade. However, I had it, but I didn't want to care whether others were sunbathing, which was obviously a trap. And when it comes to the third sub-world of "Giant Talent", it becomes even more unreadable. I only read a few chapters and stopped reading the rest. To sum up, since the sub-world is written in an American TV series, it may be much better to write in an oriental style in the main world. After all, when there was only ice and fire, it was a bit difficult to distinguish the two worlds. This is because I can recognize some of the characters in Ice and Fire after watching the TV series. Only after watching a paragraph can I distinguish the two worlds. If you have never seen it, you will be basically confused. Another point is the ability of the protagonist, mainly the Necromancer. Personally I don't like it, and most readers may not like it that much. The ability of the Sun God has not been improved by 50% of the book, so it is estimated that it will not be there later. The last point is the character of the protagonist. The early writing was quite restrained. After experiencing the two worlds, he became a little bit indifferent to life. He treated the people in the sub-world as if they were an item, dispensable. If it broke, he would repair it. If it couldn't be repaired, he would rebuild it. It's hard not to be annoying.

I wrote and wrote, the main plot is gone, the good main world is no longer written, I just finished a few copies, it's mindless.

I've seen almost a hundred pictures and the protagonist's combat power is still too low. Most of the magic he learned is entry-level.

The early stages were good, but in the middle and later stages I lost the desire to read further.