Living Inside a Computer

If it is too watery, it will become wordy if you overdo it.

The subject matter is novel but the plot is old-fashioned. There are many words but they are unnecessary and very watery. The self-logic of the novel seems to be explainable, but it cannot stand up to careful consideration. The old stereotype is that the female protagonist must cause trouble for the male protagonist, and her IQ is not up to par. The villain can always escape the protagonist, but is always defeated by the protagonist.