Martial Arts Immortality: Starting from the Spiritual Beast Map

How can I say it's mediocre, and the writing state is too slow, so in the end I only have to practice writing better and practice qi for a long time, and I have the foundation-building elixir to transform into a god. I can only write two words casually. The early stage is mediocre, so whoever wants to read it can just jump in and read it. It's better in the early stage, but bad in the later stage. Three can beat nine.

Take it slow and steady, and improve slowly. This book is not like Shuangwen, but has a bit of a traditional martial arts feel. The fighting is mainly concentrated in other countries, that is, foreign tribes. Yuanjing warriors are equivalent to nuclear deterrence, and then allocate resources according to the younger generation's competition rankings. However, in order to win, the foreigners did not hesitate to send people into Dai Viet to assassinate the genius. If it fails, the culprit commits suicide. He doesn't know how to argue, and he doesn't have a good word count. As the protagonist's status changes, he comes into contact with more and more things.

This book is for elementary school students, and the male protagonist is very superficial and mentally retarded! Abandon books

There are over a hundred chapters and I can't even kill a single bandit. There are only over 400 chapters in total. It's mind-boggling even if I think about it.

The plot is confusing and the writing is not good. It jumps directly to 15 years in the future after finishing the main character in the middle. It's really rubbish. The plot of the character is forced into the story and it feels like you shit your pants.

It sucks, the plot is mediocre

This author's style is not good. A few bandits kept writing endlessly. No wonder no one read it.

Seeing that 100 advancement is too slow,

It's actually pretty good, but it's too bland.

Chapters can be extended to 100-250 chapters. Some details can be refined. There is no explanation from friends and family. The breakthrough is ten times faster than before. It feels perfunctory.