Start a Mysterious Island

The early stage is good, the writing and the world are very good, but there are three main pitfalls. 1. Shui is outrageous. A bunch of supporting characters can fill up more than ten chapters (which have nothing to do with the protagonist). 2. The battles and villains are too monotonous. No matter how exciting the description of the battle without suspense is, it's just that. If you know you will lose or win, why bother? There is really no suspense at all. 3. It seems that there is no outline starting from the mid-term? I write wherever I think of it, two worlds and two major events mixed together, and I feel dizzy.

Let me talk about the conclusion first, it looks good. This subject matter suits my taste However, Chapter 850 is completely unreadable because it is very confusing. The content of the second half of the chapter is the same as the first half. Of course, this is a problem with 7 Cats. It may be copied and pasted directly from Biquge, because the same problem as Biquge is normal from other places. What a pity for a good book

Pure hydrology

It's so embarrassing that I don't want to talk about writing and making phone calls. Every time I write about rain, I can't move in the rain, and if I get wet in the rain, I will become hypothermic and die. I laugh to death. It's superhuman. It's a lot of nonsense. I don't want to complain anymore. Toxic and cautious.

The book is okay, the protagonist is set, and the world is good, but my evaluation of this book, quoting a sentence from the book, is, "Ocean, you are all water." The author Tai Shui has 1,300 chapters at the moment, and the protagonist's content is 400 at most. If it is said that it is related to the protagonist, it can be said, but most of them are just passersby, and the water is boundless anyway.

After reading more than 800 chapters, I felt it was okay at the beginning, but felt exhausted at the end. Already on the third level, I felt cold due to a bit of cold wind. Then I read later that it would be okay even if I was beaten in the middle of the third level after my physical strength was strengthened. Isn't this very contradictory?

No need to watch! What is all this writing about? As a time traveler or a time traveler with plug-ins, what disgusting things have you done? Total nonsense plus always doing meaningless things! Does it make sense?

. . . . When I found that I skipped a few chapters at random, then read a few pages at random, and continued to skip a few chapters and read a few pages at random, I found that it did not affect my reading. . . . The author has a lot of water. However, you can still refine the plot and read it yourself. Don't ask too much for free. After all, there are no bugs in the writing.

Water water water water water After reading more than 800 chapters, I don't particularly remember the plot. I only remember eating, raining, eating, raining.

The writing is very good, the world view is grand, the framework is well done, the pace is not so fast, and it can be watched There are a few shortcomings. Foreshadowing is too jerky. In fact, the foreshadowing only needs to be described once and annotated, and there is no need to repeat the description mindlessly. The description of the battle scene is a bit weird. With the same strength, everyone can kill instantly. It would take you a long time to fight him. This is not how Zangzhuo hides, right? The feeling of being evenly matched against ordinary people only happens to the protagonist, but the descriptions of the supporting characters are wonderful. In addition, there is a problem with the emotional color logic of the protagonist. Urgent issues are dealt with as he does whatever comes to mind. He is too calm and has no sense of urgency. All in all, it's a pity. Let's fatten them up before killing them.