Signing In During Mystery Revival

Throughout the whole story, I am following someone else's original work and I like to create characters. I say that the original work is not finished, but the details in it reveal that the author has actually finished reading the original work. And the author likes to diss the original work and dig pits, similar to the origin of the original work Gui Cha. He does not explain the origin in detail, saying that this is a pit. Including the blood soaking pool in the underworld in the original work, they were forced to diss, saying that this was a pitfall of the original work not having a circle, and that the original work did not explain how to soak it, which was a mess. Also, the article is full of slaps in the face. I mentioned earlier that the original work was unfinished and I liked to dig holes and urge people to find the author of the original work. By the way, in the article, I pretended not to know the development of the plot when I was going through the plot with the protagonist in the world, but then I immediately knew the follow-up plot after a short plot. By the way, he robbed the protagonist of his opportunity, and then said why the world is so weak? Lifting the hat again means that if you are the protagonist, you will definitely be able to do it. If you can't do it in the underworld, no one can do it. The sense of personality tearing in this writing style is simply irresistible. How about writing a ghost doctor to help treat it? I always thought it was a joke to eat other people's food while eating other people's food, but now I've seen the real thing [Tilting head, laughing and crying]

I think this book is okay. It's not as scary as the original work, it's a bit like a cool novel. Other readers thought the protagonist in this book was too cold-blooded to help rescue those people. But I think he was right. He did save some people in the Ghost Post Office, but he was not their god, and those people died in the end. Many places can't help that much. Just like the five turbid evils in the book, the world is like a prison, hell is empty, and the world is full of evil ghosts. This is the business of evil ghosts. Actually this book is okay.

There is too much nonsense. There are 4 ghosts on the pig's horns and a bunch of supernatural items are of no use to defeat 2 ghosts. At first I said that I would not join the headquarters to create my own force, but then I turned around and joined. There was no heroine, but then a younger sister and a bunch of other girls appeared out of nowhere and I was speechless.

This book is okay as a fanfic, but it is far inferior to the original work, and it belongs to the ranks of those that can be read.

Yes, I hope it won't be unfinished. It's a good book. Usually those routine books don't have any new ideas and don't exceed 300 chapters. I've just given up the book. I've been reading novels for more than ten years. I stopped reading after more than 800 chapters of Terror Resurrection. I actually saw this one until the end. Please update it quickly. It usually doesn't update for a month. I also gave up reading this book. If it is less than 3 million words, I usually don't read it. This kind of long-lasting masterpiece can't be less than 2.7 Million words. I'm too lazy to catch up. This book just likes to repeat the introduction in a way to make up the word count.

I already have three ghosts that complete the puzzle, but I am still afraid of this and that. Even if the opponent has two ghosts, it will cause trouble for the protagonist. Don't use such a big trick to suppress the fighting power. It is frustrating to open such a big trick and the writing is messy.

It's a top-notch history, but I'm afraid it will turn into an invincible novel. I also have to take into account the direction of the original plot. Are you tired of writing scenes?

The content is not good, the original work is such a good material, but he can't write it. Just like the previous batch of people who knew the danger of the Caesar Hotel, Yang Jian almost fell into trouble in the later stage. You just went there in the early stage without preparing anything, and you kept saying that the original work was not finished, but you seemed to be omniscient. You saw Wang Chaling stealing and starving to death. Why don't you know the dangers of the Caesar Hotel and directly say that Zhang Dong is dead when you know that Zhang Dong is not dead yet? The plot of Yang Jian is not that fast. He also keeps saying that Yang Jian's opportunity cannot be touched, and also wants to grab the hatchet and grab the coffin nails. The description of the human skin paper is even worse, and he keeps talking about covering his face with human skin paper. The human skin paper is not that obvious, right? The human skin paper always puts the danger in the answer. It is difficult to find out if you don't do it. Just like the last time Yang Jian, even if he controlled the ghost blood, he was blocked by the human skin paper. Also, the original plan on the bus was to sign in directly without taking action. He also knew that imprisoning the ghost might cause the balance of the bus to be broken, but he did it because he wanted to starve to death. When ghosts eat other ghosts to complete the puzzle, they have to do it on the bus. As I said before, Chu Renmei was completely silent after getting on the bus and could only command to move. Then I want to know how she uses the ghost hair. The suppression on the bus is absolute suppression, and she cannot use her own supernatural powers. This is from the original work. In the later period, Yang Jian cannot even use her ghost hair on the bus. He used supernatural powers on the bus, and used coffin nails and hatchets to kill people on the bus. When it came to you, he used ghost hair to imprison the ghost. Then Yang Jian could be said to be a mess by you. If Yang Jian didn't go to the headquarters to attend the meeting, there would be no ghost hand. Without ghost hands, it would be impossible to suppress the ghost eyes and be written to death by you sooner or later. I didn't think about it at all. And You said at the beginning that you didn't want to join the headquarters, but you kept working for the headquarters. And that Zhou Bing, I don't know why you didn't save her. She didn't seem to have done anything wrong. She almost didn't save her just because of her tone towards you. A person in charge in the early stage could only say that you performed the cold-blooded performance vividly. Even if you didn't save her, couldn't you remind her? It's not like the old guy doesn't know the horror, but he still insists on letting another ghost out and wiping the headquarters's ass all the time. The summary is that the author has obviously read the original work, but he keeps pretending that he hasn't. The writing is a mess. Using someone else's outline and writing someone else's protagonist to death, I can only say that you can write a book.

Is the protagonist of this book Yang Jian's dog? He does whatever Yang Jian asks him to do, and he also likes to be the butt wiper of the headquarters.

1. The plot is bland, there is no sense of fun and no so-called ups and downs, it is too bland. Suggestion: add some fun and cool points occasionally. 2. The writing style is already pretty good. The main focus of the plot is written in a way that is not very prominent and has a lot of feeling. Suggestion: Try to read more powerful authors and see how their articles are described and how they highlight transitions, but the sentences are still very smooth! 3. Although I haven't read much, I can still see certain problems in the article, and they are very obvious. I suggest that the author try other writing styles. An overly bland style is not suitable for this subject matter, and it is a more sudden or passionate writing style. (To be honest, for those related to ghosts, I prefer that the protagonist is the ghost itself, come on——)