All Heavens Recorded from the Heart

It's too long-winded. Some things that have nothing to do with the main plot are explained in one or two chapters. After finishing the main plot content, it starts to be long-winded again. The main plot was originally pretty good, but I didn't want to read it because it was so long-winded.

There are too many realms, and it's tiring to watch. The protagonist's character is nothing, but I choose to be beside the protagonist. The protagonist is a collection of troubles.

Messy

The ending was too sloppy, and the plots in many worlds were half-baked with no follow-up. Especially the book "The Naming Technique of the Night" I think is very interesting. It is meaningless to use the protagonist as a projection. The author will continue to work hard and make better books.

There are a lot of things in the lorry, without beginning or end.

Since you have traveled through the heavens, you will only inherit from Laojun. If you do not absorb the Tao of the heavens to strengthen your own Tao and go out of your own way, it seems that you are just a tool for others.

There are a lot of typos and repeated words. When you say that you should be a good person, you have to be sincere. The back foot is written next to the main character. From then on, he started to help wipe the butt of the protagonist.

The confusion between typos and names is very unconvincing.

Nine of the ten chapters are explanations, and the remaining chapter is pieced together from the number of words used to advance the plot.