A Simple Journey Through the Heavens

I read it for a long time. The main character is a bit useless, and the time travel is not clear and unclear. The main character is easy to write and not decisive. I was really speechless when writing about the storm. I shared Duan Lang and saved Duan Lang's child. I also wrote about the hidden dangers this child left behind. I really can't stand it anymore. I gave up.

There can be problems with the narration, and the writing doesn't taste like boiled water! 😂

Sometimes the sentences are not written smoothly and the narrative expression is unclear. Very average

Not good looking, the main character is a loser

Putting aside the 500-plus chapters of the protagonist who doesn't have any big ambitions and is unwilling to talk about it in a vague way, the plot before and after is confusing...

This protagonist should be considered the type who pretends to be crazy and pretends to be stupid... He says he doesn't know the plot, and he knows a lot of secrets. He says he knows the plot, but he doesn't know anything about the arrangement.