The Third Generation of Sui Dynasty

The writing is good and the ideas are good. There is just too much analysis, too many environmental and geographical descriptions, and too many enemy plots. What makes me most intolerable is that there are only a few women in the harem, and they are all passive and have to accept it. The author himself is so humble at home that he doesn't even dare to take the initiative to recruit women for a novel

The writing style is good and the thinking is very clear. I think proper analysis of a good novel is necessary. Don't worry about those who talk about water. That kind of meaningless articles is called water. This is much better than many time travel novels.

Overall it's not bad, but the word count is very obvious and I don't want to read half of the chapter.

Overall, it is a good book. The main problem in the early stage is that the writing style is too naive, the understanding of history is also preconceived, and the characterization of the characters is quite thin and superficial. Whether it is Yang Guang, Li Shimin, Li Jiancheng or others, there are good and evil, good and bad in the author's mind, so they are fundamentally different from historical figures. However, as the novel develops, we can clearly see the author's progress on these issues. We can find that the author has improved both in his understanding of historical materials and in his writing techniques. Structurally, it is a little tacky and the ending is not well-received. After the destruction of the Tang Dynasty, there is a relatively complete and systematic description of the new world and the ending of each character, which seems to have a hasty ending. Overall it's good, you can watch it and it's very enjoyable.

It's quite satisfactory. The plot development is good and the pace is moderate. However, it is unacceptable to directly portray all the beasts of the ancient world and Li Shimin and others as villains. I thought that I would follow Cao Cao's eclectic approach and at least eliminate the family after it is mature. There is no denying the quality of talents or resources of the family. I am higher than a humble family. I have really traveled through the open world and been shut out. I can't even imagine how miserable my death will be. Besides, the royal family itself is the largest aristocratic family. They just use a big loudspeaker to show off that I don't want the aristocratic family. It's pure stupidity. How superior it is. What's more, in the early days of starting a business, you can force the halo of a protagonist to do whatever you want. How many aristocratic families did you have in the Ming Dynasty? What is the geometry of the Yuan Dynasty? Otherwise, it is still destroyed. The decay is ultimately a problem of the system.

I can't say that the writing is bad or the thinking is not good, I just always feel that the writing is awkward, and then I suddenly realize that this is not a romance writing method. I often describe appearance, scenery, clothing, and so-and-so are amazing, various psychological descriptions, various analyses, and the tactics are also very crude.

I can't stand it anymore, the protagonist gives me the impression that he is Wang Mang

The plot is very childish

There are too many typos. In one chapter, most of the paragraphs have typos, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

The basic logic is clear, and the plot is basically reasonable. However, the number of words copied from history is too obvious, and there are several chapters. Overall, it is still worth reading.