Country Life in My Pocket Dimension

I finally understand why this book isn't popular. It's the author's problem. When characters talk, they don't write which sentence is said by which person. When there are many people, you don't know who is talking. It looks very confusing, and sometimes the connections are wrong and I feel like I don't know what is being said.

I gave up after reading less than 100 chapters. I felt that many parts of the article were too exaggerated, and the combination of cultivation and civilian life was quite different and lacked authenticity. Moreover, I didn't like the author's writing techniques. Some places felt that the description was not very detailed, and the logic in some places was not very reasonable. The concept of time was not organized well. Sometimes it lasts for half a year and sometimes it only lasts a few days. In fact, if the author had made good use of the space and used it in rural life to improve food, seeds, and family environment, there would be a special love between brother and sister. The story of searching for parents and uniting the tribe should be very exciting. As a result, the author wrote some messy stories that looked like fairy tales. I hope the author can improve his writing skills and write good articles.

Qiwen, it's so holy. The people in the old house tortured the original owner to death. Both the brother and the sister left the house. The hostess' father also adopted him after he came back. He even gave his grandparents 20 taels of silver every year. What does the death of the original owner count? This author doesn't write serial numbers for each chapter, and he doesn't write clearly what characters speak. He has to rely on the readers to guess. I can tolerate the farming novels and the immortal cultivation novels, but I can't endure the sacred novels.

Abandoned the article

The front looks good, but it's a bit like Madonna, the finale✍👀

Hail Mary

Nice

I thought it was okay at first, but I can't stand it anymore. The heroine's character is too unlikable. She has no sense of crisis. She doesn't distinguish between master and servant, and the space is exposed at will. In the end, they are separated. The marriage to the male protagonist is not love at the beginning. There are too many trivial things. It's very confusing to watch. It's boring. Xiu Xian can even have a servant without any relatives, not even the emperor, but in the end he can do it with just one servant. I'm speechless.

Extremely ugly