Lingding

Cultivation of immortality and hair is basically a waste of time on women. Anyone can catch a woman with pig feet and threaten her. It is like this at every turn. My level is already low. Can you spend more time on cultivation and wait until you have the strength to fall in love?

It's not my cup of tea, no wonder not many people saw it, so I gave up decisively.

After reading Chapter 200, it's really rubbish. It's okay for anyone to grab the protagonist's friend and threaten the protagonist to death. Can this be called a novel where the strong respects the strong? It's too rubbish, delete it.

Sorry, the writing is not good

The plot is scattered and absurd, and the logic is not rigorous enough.

The protagonist is 13 years old and has been practicing at the 8th level, but his cultivation level has been gone for 3 years. That is now 16 years old. Can't you change the scene you saw 8 years ago, when your face was red and your nose was bleeding? Can an 8-year-old child do it?

Too much talking

I don't know what it means when I write it

Difference

It's really nice to have consummation at least.