Rebirth as a Master of Learning, Cultivating Immortality Online

Let's comment first…or you can read it to pass the time. Let me complain first, the training system is confusing. I was a cultivator in my previous life! Later it was Gu Wu? Whose ancient martial arts knows magic! Whose ancient martial arts cultivation realm is the same as cultivating immortals! Then why don't you just say that you are also cultivating immortality? Why separate? ? ? And at the beginning, it was said that foundation building was difficult, and many people got stuck here. Then there are a lot of people behind who are above the foundation level.

Childish

Nice

It's a bit trivial, but it's okay to pass the time.

It's okay, it's okay to listen to while passing the time, but sometimes the preface doesn't match the postscript, and it feels a bit like reading a book. In addition, most of the female supporting characters in the article are miserable regardless of whether they are friends of the heroine or not? (This description may have some problems) Basically, they are forced to engage in pre-marital sex for various reasons, which makes me wonder if the author only knows this way of writing☹️ Even if he is with the cp later, I still feel that this plot setting is not OK

After seeing Chapter 477, I wanted to give up the article several times before, but finally gave up here. I kept emphasizing that elixirs and spiritual stones are precious, but in the end, they can be given away casually. The heroine's character is incomprehensible, and I can't understand it anyway, so it's hard to comment on it.

The heroine is a bit indecisive. She doesn't have any special skills or golden fingers except for practicing. She doesn't have the decisiveness to be the head of the house.

Actually, I just started expecting Cheng Jing to be the male protagonist. When I saw Ye Ningsheng behind me, I actually wanted to give up, but I still wanted to continue watching. I can only say that I am quite sad about Cheng Jing's ending, so that's it.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, although I didn't see any typos, the text application lacked some meaning and made people feel a little superficial and childish?

Not happy at all Can't the author just make the heroine stronger? It's too slow and not straightforward at all.