The Great Fusion of Earths Across the Heavens

There are too many dialogues between the characters in the plot, and too little introduction to the surrounding environment. The prefixes of the dialogues do not indicate which character is speaking. I was confused when listening to the book. It felt like just a few people talking, without any sense of involvement at all.

This article goes from Chapter 11 to Chapter 14. The middle chapters 12 and 13 are completely gone. Don't know what to write? The protagonist passed through the door that was protected by so many special forces for 15 minutes. How come there are only two people left after time travel? There were so many special forces protecting him before the time travel, but only one person was left to protect him after the time travel. Does he not care about the safety of the protagonist at all? The author's writing is very messy. Write something here and something there. Those who are watching cannot see clearly or understand. The writing wasn't very good at the beginning. If you win a lottery randomly, you can invest tens of billions in stocks later. No matter what, it is impossible to reach tens of billions at once.

Author! I want to ask, what are you writing about. . . Can the previous sentence match the following sentence?

Most people can't understand

It's boring to read the rest before Chapter 50.

Multiple heroines, single heroine or no heroine?

How can I put it this way? It's a very good theme, but why is it so messy?