Zerg OL: This Game Has 100 Million Points

What can I say, the front is quite exciting. I want to write a 500,000-word post-apocalyptic novel. I will travel 10 years ago at the beginning and make a game using Ito (controlling bugs in a parallel world 10 years later). The Zerg (the strength is equivalent to missiles, and it is difficult to write in the later stage if it is too strong) kill monsters (viruses) and save the future first. After writing, how many words are missing? Let me make a cool essay.

It's a pretty good book. I've read it in the middle and later stages. There aren't any major flaws. It's quite humorous. The author's writing is not very good. I should write another book or two before writing this one. It should be better in summary. It's pretty good.

Overall, this is a funny novel, but it becomes less and less like it as it goes on. It is said that the greatest respect for civilization is to kill everyone. Every planet here has some people who are very admirable, but this is also the ultimate reason for their destruction. Except these are well written, nothing else is good.

I have already thought about how it would be very interesting for them to enter the game and hit the earth, and see themselves playing the game. I hope the author can write this thing out.

I originally came here for the Zerg race. After reading the first 40 chapters, I realized that this is an online game novel, so if you come with the same expectations as me, you don't need to read it.

I really can't see anyone commenting on it, which shows how special this book is. Seeing that the world of cultivating immortals has started to be written again with more than 600 chapters, new players entering the world are no different from ordinary people. I originally thought that this world would still be passed through in a hurry, but it is almost 700 chapters and I have only written the beginning. It is estimated that there will be 100-200 chapters to finish. The point I want to complain about is that players have been playing the game for so long without realizing that it is the real world. Of course, this is actually not important. Originally, the author did not write much about the real world. Some places were very confusing. In the middle, it was said that the game enabled pain sensation. Later, I didn't know how to do it and deleted it all. It was written as if there is no feeling. Players who were just starting out, such as Salted Fish and the like (who didn't appear much later), inexplicably stopped writing and began to focus on the technology side. Then the main line began to become very confusing, and I didn't know whose perspective I was following. I was rambling here and there. The players who appeared later did not have names. The technology completely surpassed the advantages of the Zerg itself. The development of the earth completely stopped later. At that time, the earth was brought into that place. However, more than 100 years later, there was no result, so the players are not important at all. What is written in the middle is that old players have grown older and can live to more than 1,000 years. In order to prevent players from discovering that this is the real world, they can only live to an average of 120 years. Isn't this nonsense? Technology has advanced by leaps and bounds in the first two years, but as a result, there is no mention at all after that, and life is completely useless. To summarize, after reading the later part of this book, I found that bugs have no effect at all. I wanted to write about the evolution results but then went to write about other things. The player is doing nothing while the protagonist is cultivating immortality. At least many of the bug OLs I saw have nothing to do with bugs. The first brood nest I wrote about was related to the queen, but it turned out that the queen bugs had difficulty even evolving, so where did the bug nest come from? Many of your things are contrary to what you wrote. It's just numb.

I'm afraid this author is a junior high school teacher. He likes to reason and be logical, but his level is far from that of university professors. He analyzes everything in detail, but often fails to grasp the key points. He is long-winded and verbose. If he doesn't understand or understand, he will not write or blur it. You are writing novels, not philosophical monographs. Internet articles can be superficial, but they must not be confusing.

3/5 Of the chapter is filled with players beeping among themselves, which is too watery.

The reason for suppressing the protagonist and not summoning more players is that there is not enough money (from Blue Star).

The author is really too detailed. As long as the target appears, he will introduce it in a click. What can I say? Important goals are okay. The unimportant ones will really be a bit unbearable to watch, so you can skip these.